zisted.com [Review]this please

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    loveispoison, Jul 29, 2008 IP
  2. cobwoyrob

    cobwoyrob Member

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    A couple minor adjustments need to be made to the paragraph on your homepage that links to the signup page. Professional writing is essential to gain your clients' trust. Make the paragraph flow a little more, maybe not make the whole block a link. Maybe add a "Sign Up Now!" link under the paragraph. Change "Why Create A Forum?And Choose Us" to just "Why Create a Forum?". Add a space after the comma near the end of the paragraph (change "...with other users,zisted" to "...with other users, zisted". But all in all, your service looks great. Just need a few touch ups to make it look more professional.
     
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    camp185 Well-Known Member

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    Already mentioned this for another site, but it applies to your site as well. Your icons don't match your content. What does "@" symbol have to do with support? Probably would be better off moving your "?" from "Terms of Service" to there. Also, the "Create a Free Forum" button looks really bad.
     
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    hmmmm ok will try to fix those and get back to you guys thanks
     
    loveispoison, Jul 29, 2008 IP
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    GagConcert Banned

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    the ? should go to why chose us

    i see no point in putting those signs where they are
     
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  6. hostmaster

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    Nice design buddy :)
     
    hostmaster, Jul 29, 2008 IP
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    Your Nav bar is a little tore up. Like the color scheme though.
     
    novashun, Jul 29, 2008 IP
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    cakung Peon

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    wow...your site very nice... :D
     
    cakung, Jul 30, 2008 IP
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    nice site ... reduce Font size & UNBOLD all content except headers
     
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