Your thought of http://www.park-ridge.il.us/relaxo/index.html

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    jeremyn, Dec 28, 2005 IP
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    GRIM Prominent Member

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    Nice and simple, IMO it works. Might want to break the paragraphs up a bit for easier reading, otherwise for a simple and straight forward design I think it's pretty good.

    You might also want to add more than the buy button on the bottom...such as 'buy all now for' after each product description.
     
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    Please don't use times new roman. it gives your site an amatour look. use verdana size 11 instead. that's just a suggestion.
     
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    Is that why no one uses times new roman? I thought it was better because it was faster to read.
     
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    I was in park ridge for lunch today...and my name is Jeremy....

    Small world:)

    How would you visitors access that page? Is it linked to from other areas from within the site? Just noticed there's no navigation off the page and was wondering how people arrive there and where they could find more info (via a link) if they wanted it.
     
    GuyFromChicago, Dec 29, 2005 IP
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    I think the website could definately use some navigation links, and before that, some more pages with content to link to. ;)
     
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    Right now I plan on keeping this at one page. I have created a slightly revised condensed version here: http://www.park-ridge.il.us/relaxo/index2.html

    I plan on having revisions until I am happy with it. I don't think I need naviagtion with one page.

    I plan on submitting to DMOZ, putting a refer a friend link on the "thank you" page and making a background as a promotional.
     
    jeremyn, Dec 30, 2005 IP