Your opinions please

Discussion in 'General Chat' started by SCOBAHCAN, Feb 25, 2008.

  1. #1
    I am going to advertise my website in other places, on the Internet. Besides, search engines.

    Before I do so. I would like to ask you please for your opinion of my ad's below or, if you have any that

    Ones that maybe more appealing. Please let me know.


    Thank you Craig


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    Looking for a place to visit ?

    Victoria-British-Columbia-Canada – “the city of gardens”

    Do you plan to visit Victoria in beautiful British Columbia Canada?
    Save your time and money by getting some Insider Tips
    from people who actually live in Victoria.

    Visit our "one stop" website for all the details and information
    you need to plan your memorable business visit or holiday:

    Victoria has all the functionality of a large city but it retains the charm of a small city.
    It has the nicest climate in Canada. Not to mention a British heritage.

    Also there is FREE PDF guide to the city, that you can download.


    For details please visit.

    www.victoria-bc-canada-guide.com

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    Looking for a place to visit ?

    Looking for a place to visit ?
    A place that has all the functionality of a large
    city but it retains the charm of a small city.
    It has the nicest climate in Canada.
    Not to mention a British heritage.
    Also there is FREE PDF guide to the
    city, that you can download.

    For details please visit.

    www.victoria-bc-canada-guide.com

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    Looking for a place to visit ?

    Victoria-British-Columbia-Canada – “the city of gardens”

    Do you plan to visit Victoria in beautiful British Columbia Canada?
    Save your time and money by getting some Insider Tips
    from people who actually live in Victoria.

    Visit our "one stop" website for all the details and information
    you need to plan your memorable business visit or holiday:
     
    SCOBAHCAN, Feb 25, 2008 IP
  2. Dayton Internet Marketing

    Dayton Internet Marketing Peon

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    Your ad should reflect your keywords more then anything. Think of what your customers are going to be searching for and incorporate those words so that you kill two birds with one stone if you do this it will help your google ranking also.
     
  3. sher.khalsa

    sher.khalsa Peon

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    if had to choose from the three ads you have provided i would most definitely go for number 1. why ?? because it is well written (though you can improve it but playing with the words a bit) & it has the magic word free in it.
     
    sher.khalsa, Jan 2, 2009 IP