I am trying to build my list and I have sent some ppc traffic to this thing with little success, can you take a look at it and tell me what I need to change, here is the link --> http://tinyurl.com/3dp64s I would send $10 to the person with the best opinion thru paypal and pls DONT OPT-IN
You need to add color to the opt in box, but not yellow. Maybe a blue of some sort. And add a nice neutral background color. Also bring the opt in box higher in the page. Don't treat it like a landing page so much. And within that email optin box, add a benefit to signing up, like a free 7 week course of some sort or other free BS, Also I would add don't use red at all. It means stop and go away. Make your colors a nice blue color if anything. Look at all the top sites out there, most have tons of blue in them. People like blue. Probably something else, create a bigger border around the optin in area to draw more attention to it. If want to draw even more attention add a nice image next to the opt in box and people will immediately stare at that when the page opens. Having your opt in box next to it will increase conversions. That's about it, good luck. If I help or whatever, kingbrend at gmail is my paypal.
What I see here is very poor presentation of the product. Just a few lines without any graphics and feed backs. No opinions or credits. Who wouldbe willing to spend money on sucha poorly written intro page? Make a blog or site for the product and make it speak to the target clients. It apperas the product may be good but poorly introduced. Make it colorful and let it speak the language of love.
Free tips don't need to pay me for it . Your page is talking about the way you should approach women and etc ... So don't you think you need a picture of a man talking to a woman or a picture of a woman begging a man . Like she couldn't get her hands off of him . You need to show the buyers that's what can actually happen if they get this guide from you One more thing put some colors on that page man . People love pictures and colors , so give it to them . No publicity but I really think kingbrend deserve that $ 10 so far
There is just one thing missing on your page... Because all in all it's a good squeeze page and it should serve your purpose well but there is ONE problem with it... It might not be as obvious, but put yourself in the shoes of your visitor. He sees your page. Okay. Now he reads about those things that you will teach him and starts thinking if he should put in his email. Well as I see it, there is just no real reason for him to enter the site. There is no real "YEAH, I WANT THIS" in your list. So to change this you have to promise UNIQUE value. And what's better then a free ebook. A free ebook that only first 200 visitors will get! (to show scarcity and increase it's value in an instant) Do this and you will have A LOT of more leads. Don't forget that this is an old marketing "trick" and I still can't understand why aren't more people using it. Think about it... How EASY is it to write a 15 page ebook? Dude, it's ridiculously easy. And it will do great things for your opt-in ratio. So here it is. But it's on you to take action and make it. ASIDE from that I'd go for less "marketing language" in the page and I would make a better headline.
I think you need a few things: 1. You need a spiffy, professional-quality graphic on top. As it is now, your site seems like it was thrown up by an ameteur web designer. You want your website to seem like an established, credible source of information on attracting women. You want to seem like an authority on the subject. A text-only web page looks... new and unestablished. Imagine if you can across a text-only site with only a few words and no graphics. Would you trust them as a good source of information on your topic? Your graphic can be super-high quality without costing much. Just go to the DigitalPoint contest forum and you can probably find someone to make you a nice header and logo for $30. 2. Take the first words of the site-- "Stop chasing women. Make them chase you!" Make it big, bold, and central on the page. Beneath it say something like, "Free Tips to Attracting the Women of Your Dreams". Emphasize the word free. And then hit them with the email opt-in fields. Instead of "Give me free access", make the button say, "I want to learn how" or something that will spark their curiosity. Most people-- especially men who are single-- don't like to read a lot. They'll glance at a screen, not read a whole schpeal. Give them the "jist of it" in the first few lines. And be sure the opt-in is near the top of the screen where they can't miss it. 3. Keep it edgy. You need to spark some emotion. Saying things like, "How to become successful with women" and "the kind of dates women want to go on" is booooo-ring. Instead say things like, "You have the power to attract women!" and "Do you know how to kiss a woman like she's never been kissed before? Let me tell you how!" Use the word YOU a lot. It's an old marketing trick that really works. It makes people want to react. Also, ask some questions on the screen so you have people's minds interacting with the text. 4. Don't call it "free access." Call it a free report. Or a free eBook. Or something like that. "Free access" seems like a commitment to a big site. Nobody wants "access" since this is a very private, personal issue for most men. They want something they can read and learn from. 5. I don't know for sure, but I suspect one problem might be getting traffic. You need to build backlinks and advertise the page. If nobody finds the page, they won't be able to opt-in. Add a few of those tiny, microscopic internal links at the bottom to attract google spiders. (Google will raise you up if you have more than one page.) And let them lead to some informative articles. Content is the key to getting traffic. It does take some time and hard work, but it pays off well in the end. Good luck to you.
Thanks guys, fireboat pm me your paypal for the $10 I have gotten a graphic designer from the warrior forum to take care of the site after which I would take your recommendations. For now I would just leave it like that
Thanks for the offer. No payment necessary. I'm just here to learn from others and help when I can. Good luck with your site, agbeyegbe.