Nothing much, just improve it a bit. (it was my first attempt) Must have reasonable experience with www.squidoo.com Must have MSN or Yahoo Messenger (I am online now) Thank you.
Post your lens to the Critique Me... forum on SquidU.com - there are many helpful Lensmasters there who will give you free advice on how to improve it.
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