Buying [WTH] I need a rewrite done professionally

Discussion in 'Content Creation' started by say_hello, Apr 25, 2010.

  1. #1
    Hello! I want ot hire a article rewriter. I need to rewrite this sales page:

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    "High PR Backlinks Are The Secret Too High
    Rankings In Google."

    Sub Head: "Watch Your Site Move Up To The First
    Page Of Google Days After You Get My High PR Backlinks"

    Google can only tell if your site is good or not and
    worth a high ranking if other people tell Google they
    like your site. Backlinks are like popularity votes in
    in Google's eyes.

    Sub Head: The More You Have The Higher You Go

    Google determines the most popular sites not only by
    how many links but by the quality of those links. Every
    website in the world has a certain PR score.

    PR is how Google judges quality of a link. PR 3 is average
    and anything PR 5 and above means GREATNESS. Remember
    technically Google is just a robot it has to assign formulas.

    So what I do for you is just plain common sense, I go
    out and get you PR 5, 6, and 7 backlinks. When Google
    see's this it says "Holy cow people I gave a high PR
    score to all think this other site is great. I better think
    it's great too, after all the people voted for it."

    Sub Head: This Is all Plain Common Sense

    There's a story of a guy who gets paid to come work
    on this fancy engine. He gets paid a hundreds thousand
    dollars to come fix this engine. No one else has been
    able to fix it.

    The guy walks up pulls out his hammer and make one
    hard bang in a special spot of the engine. Everyone
    roars with applause!

    The owner gets all pissed off and demands a bill of
    sale claiming that he got ripped off because the job
    was too easy and he paid too much for it.

    The hero engine fixer sits down and writes on a piece
    of paper...

    Hammer: $25.00
    Knowing Where To Hit: $99,975

    That's exactly why you need to pay me for backlinks
    because I know exactly where to get you the best
    ones. I have researched this process for months.

    If you tried to go buy 1 backlink on a PR 6 or 7 site
    you'd have to pay at least $50 - $150 FOR JUST ONE
    LINK. I know some blogs that charge $80/month for
    having just one link on their site.

    Today I'm only charging you $297 one time and I'll
    go get you 297 high quality backlinks. I guarantee
    that the majority of them will be PR 5, 6, and 7
    quality or your money back.

    Place Your Secure Order Here

    Guarantee: Together we will find the perfect
    keyword or you may have your own. If after I finish
    your site is not on the first page of Google I'll
    refund 75% of your money. I can't do 100% only
    because this is so much work to do and I can
    never get that time I spend back.

    Place Your Secure Order Here

    Thanks,
    [your name]

    P.S. How much money can you make when you are
    on the first page of Google? A lot of people say a
    first page ranking is like having gold in the bank. It
    never loses value only becomes more valuable.

    Place Your Secure Order Here
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    I will pay 2-5$ for this. i need it to be written in Proper English without any mistakes. Waiting for your prices. Thanks.
     
    say_hello, Apr 25, 2010 IP
  2. omshanti

    omshanti Well-Known Member

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    I will do it for you if you want.

    Sending you a PM now.
     
    omshanti, Apr 25, 2010 IP
  3. say_hello

    say_hello Active Member

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    omshanti I have paid you. Please start the rewrite. Thanks.
     
    say_hello, Apr 27, 2010 IP