Wrote My First Song - Life Is (Take A Look Please)

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    Life is….

    Life is….

    You try to look alright but u know it ain’t good
    Everyone tries to bring u down whenever they could
    Hope brings u the joy for a better life
    You wish you had a Good family, caring children and a beautiful wife

    The past haunts you and you try to hide
    But you can’t escape because life was never on your side
    When you’re hurt, you put on a fake smile and wish it was good
    But the tears inside you tells the real truth the way it should

    Life in the making
    You been good at it faking
    Wish it was a clear sky with birds singing
    But You are all messed up and crying.
    All alone…….

    The girl you loved had a different thing for you
    Now you think about the times and feel so blue
    She was never yours and neither were your dreams
    Slipping through your fingers she is gone forever it seems

    You thought you will get the one for you
    Feels like you lied to yourself and I know it too
    Just to make you feel really good
    My past wasn’t better than yours, smile if you could

    Life in the making
    You been good at it faking
    Wish it was a clear sky with birds singing
    But You are all messed up and crying.
    All alone…….

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    http://www.kamalhasa.com/my-first-song-err-lyrics-lol/644/

    You think I got a shot at the music biz.

    Am kiddin lol ;)

    Anyways your reviews are welcome would love to read your love and rants at my work. Thanks :)
     
    SOULZRIPPER, Sep 19, 2009 IP
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    SOULZRIPPER Well-Known Member

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    #2
    My 2nd ;)

    Still remember the time when I was in school
    Spending 8 hours with my friends, it was just so cool
    Sharing about the views that we had in our lives
    It was a Carefree life like a rolling dice

    Had the first crush of my life with this beautiful woman
    Was supposedly one of my school teacher back then...
    I was a Young life with a promising future
    Turned out to be a lazy fuck 8 years later.

    Wasting time through my life was not a criteria
    When we were checking out the girls in the cafeteria
    Me and my friends questioned the holy creator
    About how that dark girl could have been hotter if she was a little taller

    This verse goes out to all of my buddies
    Still remember the glorious days and now I’m in my 20s
    Seems like it was just yesterday that we were all together
    Life is such a bitch that we aren't even talking to each other.

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    SOULZRIPPER, Sep 25, 2009 IP
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    wamm9512 Active Member

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    #3
    Very nice. Thank you for sharing. You sing?
     
    wamm9512, Sep 25, 2009 IP
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    SOULZRIPPER Well-Known Member

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    #4
    I wish I can record, but I haven't so far...

    But very soon I'll be doing that ;)

    Thanks for the appreciation though :D
     
    SOULZRIPPER, Sep 25, 2009 IP
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    wamm9512 Active Member

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    No problem, hope you record some soon and let us hear it :) would love to listen
     
    wamm9512, Sep 25, 2009 IP
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    links Peon

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    #6
    My be spread your song in youtube
     
    links, Sep 25, 2009 IP
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    I'll try my guitar with that
     
    alex894, Sep 25, 2009 IP
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    geekos Well-Known Member

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    #8
    I love the lyrics ;) Hope you can record a sample track and post it on youtube ;)
     
    geekos, Sep 25, 2009 IP
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    #9
    Nice song with good effort

    Best of luck for your future !:)
     
    Awan-G, Sep 25, 2009 IP
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    aamer_gerrard Banned

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    #10
    Nice work, I must say!
     
    aamer_gerrard, Sep 26, 2009 IP
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    SocialSignals Well-Known Member

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    #11
    Nice lyrics! You have talent! Wish you luck for the future!
     
    SocialSignals, Sep 26, 2009 IP
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    #12
    love those lines ..... good job !! :)
     
    kiran12, Sep 26, 2009 IP
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    Yeah, post it up on youtube so we can hear how the melody lines go
     
    Ducati1198, Sep 26, 2009 IP
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    #14
    I just can’t think of nothing else but you,
    I find it hard to be not in Love
    When you are around,
    Sweet tender Girl You are My Life,

    You are my Life, forever.....

    You gave me the chance to prove
    How much I loved you,
    I shall be ever grateful to you girl
    Forever till I die it would be just you,

    It would be just you, forever.....

    The path you and I had was different
    But life brought us together,
    I wanted you in my life the moment i saw you
    I waited long enough before you were all mine

    You were all mine, forever.......

    Sweet Love that we have for each other
    Shall not wither away till the end of our lives,
    Every day is a new day for Us together
    I just wanna tell you again “I Love You”

    And I would Love You, forever and forever
    Till the end of time, My Love....

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    Dedicated to my LOVE :)
     
    SOULZRIPPER, Nov 14, 2009 IP
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    #15
    hey cool song.. i must say..
    jus back it up with a music which m keen to hear..
    hope to hear it soon..
    bst of luck..n kp it up..:)
     
    jasmine kapoor, Nov 14, 2009 IP
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    #16
    nice lyrics...:)
     
    jasmine kapoor, Nov 14, 2009 IP