Writing good headlines for sales letters

Discussion in 'Copywriting' started by NICKY Nitro, Jul 2, 2008.

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Which works for a sales copy short and snappy headlines or storytelling headlines?

  1. short and snappy headlines

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  2. storytelling headlines

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  1. Live2Write

    Live2Write Active Member

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    #21
    How about a short snappy headline that conveys a story? I like something like that (read somewhere that a writer should'nt be generous on words..rather he should not waste words and I believe it).

    Turbulence! Can you please try and write a headline that is short, sweet yet conveying a story? ;) Probably, will help enthusiasts like me. Thanks in advance!
     
    Live2Write, Jul 21, 2008 IP
  2. NICKY Nitro

    NICKY Nitro Well-Known Member

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    A short and snappy headline that is sweet yet conveying a story is,"The difference between losers and winners!

    This has got to continue with a story that reveals what that difference really is. As you see this example doesn't really reveal a story of a kind, but it squeezes the curiosity trigger for sure.

    P.S. I'm not saying this is the best example. If anyone has a better one, please post it here. It will be appreciated by the folks who are interested in copywriting and writing headlines in particular.
     
    NICKY Nitro, Jul 21, 2008 IP
  3. @phang

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    Just write a headline suited to the product and the audience. Try not to get caught up in the different "types" of headline - write something that suits what you're selling, or hire someone who knows how to do that professionally.
     
    @phang, Jul 24, 2008 IP