Would you review my blog?

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by tolgafiratoglu, Dec 13, 2008.

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    tolgafiratoglu, Dec 13, 2008 IP
  2. cheapez

    cheapez Active Member

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    A web page can be just simple like this, the contents on your page are easy to read, navigation is easy to use. You won it.
     
    cheapez, Dec 13, 2008 IP
  3. kingofsanda

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    The content and the graphics are good but I think you should add a few more
    colors into the color scheme of the site.
     
    kingofsanda, Dec 13, 2008 IP
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    Making the imagery into a gallery could help the page to load faster. One gripe is too much white space.
     
    SFOD_D223, Dec 13, 2008 IP
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    interesting portal..most of the visitors are from one country...am sure u can increase your traffic manyfold if u luk at global reviews
     
    ashlay79, Dec 13, 2008 IP
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    lycos Well-Known Member

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    While I think the design and layout look pretty good, you should also look into grammar mistakes as well.
     
    lycos, Dec 14, 2008 IP
  7. syndications

    syndications Banned

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    looks nice, if you optimize your web images size, it will load very fast
     
    syndications, Dec 14, 2008 IP
  8. HardgainerTips_com

    HardgainerTips_com Peon

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    Hi

    Nice site, however it seems to have too much white space and not enough color. Putting borders around the images may help in addition to adding a new sidebar on the right.

    Good luck
     
    HardgainerTips_com, Dec 14, 2008 IP
  9. Janck

    Janck Active Member

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    Design is very poor. You should really do something about it. You will have a big bounce rate because of people who think that "i wont find anything on this site". Why not try to download a free template and modifying it?
     
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    I think u need a ncie header, i also think the website is to thin...
    Hope this helps

    Cheers

    Tom
     
    suffolkpoker, Dec 14, 2008 IP
  11. hmansfield

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    I think the layout for this type of site is all wrong

    If you are going to write about hotels and resorts from all over the world, you need to have category menus so that readers can find things in an orderly fashion, instead of just random posts that span the globe..

    Your content leaves a lot to be desired. You really need to provide interesting information, or solve a problem...Why would people come to this site ? Just to read some random excerpts about hotels ?

    You also need to work on your grammar. Right away, eye level is a grammatical error that will turn people off in the first 2 seconds and make them back out of the page.

    "What is an hotel" No only is it a boring headline, but it should be "What is a hotel". You use "an" before subjects that start with a vowel.

    You seem to have put more thought on the adsense placement, than the actual design and content. I you want to be successful, you need to do it the other way around.

    JMO
     
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    Yep, the site is qutie poorly designed, and would benefit greatly from being put into a CMS such as wordpress with even a basic theme. This would structure the content better and also help readers get to the content quicker.

    On the note of content, run it through a spelling and grammar checker - Google won't like errors and neither do readers! Good luck!
     
    FaceJolt, Dec 14, 2008 IP
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    It is quite plain design . The left menu and the text on the right are the same font size .
    The font size is too small and hard to read . The navigation menus are not eye-catching .
     
    justinlorder, Dec 15, 2008 IP
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    #14
    get someone from here to design you a nice logo/header. i've seen guys here make some awesome stuff for just $20!

    also, change the orange/yellow color text to a darker color. it's hard to read against the white bg. try a dark blue which matches your menu.
     
    OzzyWeb, Dec 16, 2008 IP