would you please review my website www.draligus.com

Discussion in 'Placement / Reviews / Examples' started by draligus, Nov 29, 2006.

  1. tsptom

    tsptom Well-Known Member

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    #21
    I agree that the text is overwhelming. I would cut those down and link to the entire verbiage on another page putting a [more] at the end of the sentence. Then you can throw a couple of image ads between the separate articles. I have no idea what that says but here's what I mean:

    lazer epilasyon
    diyet zayıflama kilo verme Lazer epilasyon nedir. Vücuttaki kılların alınmasıdır lazer epilasyon. Vücutta istenmeyen kıllar tüyler olan kadın ve erkek lazer epilasyon adayıdır. [more]


    Then an image ad before the next row of articles.
     
    tsptom, Jan 23, 2007 IP
  2. draligus

    draligus Well-Known Member

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    thanks, some more comments?
     
    draligus, Feb 8, 2007 IP