Would you change something here?

Discussion in 'General Marketing' started by kozyavka, Aug 9, 2008.

  1. #1
    Hey, guys
    need your advice here, all suggestions are very much appreciated:). Here is the site http://tinyurl.com/5ofgdt that I need you to take a look at

    And here are my questions

    1. Is it clear what this site is selling?
    2. What would you change in the design?
    3. What do you like about this site?

    I will add "reputation" for everyone who will leave a detailed reply. Thank you for your help!:)
     
    kozyavka, Aug 9, 2008 IP
  2. !Unreal

    !Unreal Well-Known Member

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    1. Is it clear what this site is selling?
    2. What would you change in the design?
    3. What do you like about this site?

    1. Well I think you are selling computer cooling systems. It's not very clear. I think you should make some improvments there.
    2. The design rocks! I would keep it definatly.
    3. The design is the best without a doubt.

    I would really make sure that people know what you are selling it seems very vague.
     
    !Unreal, Aug 9, 2008 IP
  3. magda

    magda Notable Member

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    Software for samples in laboratory freezers? - that's very specialist - but I'd say the site seemed clear and explained what it's about well.
    EDIT - I didn't think it was cooling systems - I thought it was a database system to identify and track different samples
    Also - bear in mind that your specialist audience already comes to a site like that with some knowledge.
     
    magda, Aug 9, 2008 IP
  4. Paludis

    Paludis Peon

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    Yeah I have nfi what it is you're selling. The site is very nice though.
     
    Paludis, Aug 9, 2008 IP
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    I really have no idea what your site is selling. At first I thought it was pc coolers, but then "unlimited users" threw me off.

    The design is very good though. But your wording definitely needs some work
     
    NovaNET, Aug 9, 2008 IP