Would this intise you into getting hosting?

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    amanamission Notable Member

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    Well, seeing as how the site claims to be unaffiliated with the host...I can't say that's very credible. Is it somehow true?
    People need to trust a host, so dishonest tactics will not "entice" people to register their precious real estate with a host that poses as impartial reviewers.
     
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    Cardiff_88 Guest

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    That is more meaning I am not the hosting provider, aka I don't own the company. I guess it sounds wrong? Ok will fix that cheers.
     
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    Hey, I clicked through.

    The title is good, but the subheading is wayyy too condensed.

    Also, you should make it short and snappy.
    Would you honestly a) read about how someone found the best web host for 20 minutes then click on the link to actually see the host, or b) read 5 random key phrases or words from the page, and click on the CLICK HERE link to check it out for yourself? If you chose a), I can tell you right now you are part of the minority.

    Hope that helped!
     
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    tranx90210 Peon

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    No it has not convinced me to do so sorry.
     
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    I think you colors need to be changes in your sub-header. The "WEFOUNGTHEBESTHOST!" could have a little more distance between the words. I think the sub-heading under it needs to be put in a different color and more distances adding between the words. They are hard on the eyes and they look like they are running together. Also, I would change my bullet points to a different color. I wouldn't won't the bullet pointer words to be the same color as your body after them. Try that if you want and see what you think.
     
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    To be taken seriously you really need to look at your grammar, the content looks like it was written by someone quite young. I'd be put off because when I "Mouseover" your link I see what appears to be an affiliate ID, and if I were interested I'd go directly to the host. Maybe you should set up a blog where you review several webhosts and list the Pros and cons of each and then finally promote your affiliate link. I'm sorry but it really doesn't work for me.
     
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    Doesn't at all - I just went to their website and are pretty much sure they oversell!
     
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    Alright, I noticed a lot of grammar errors. So I decided to fix them and help you out a bit. I rewrote a few sentences that I thought needed a little spicing up. There is still a lot of stuff I would probably change, but I tried to fix it up as best I could. The changes I've made are in bold, and the original mistakes are in parentheses.



    We did a lot of research, in fact we tested over 40 hosts. Some (where) were really bad, some where ok. But none even came close (as) to being as good as the winner, WebHostingBuzz.

    See below why we think WebHostingBuzz wins when it comes to providing a great service and a perfect price!

    The company knows what they are talking about: Yes
    When your hosting a website you don't want it to go down (as) if one of the hosting (providers) provider's staff members (forgot) forgets to flip a switch. If (your) you're hosting a professional retail website or just a hobby website, uptime is very important. WebHostingBuzz has A+ uptime!

    Pricing is cheap but yet not oversold: Yes
    I am sure a lot of the time you have seen hosting from (company's) companies that offer unlimited space and unlimited bandwidth, these are the same companies that suddenly go off-line with your data. Most of the time with these web sites, they control what type of files you can share. For example some hosts don't allow you to have files over a certain file size. With WebHostingBuzz you get a great price with all the specs you need, without them over-selling and possibly damaging the servers and your files. <<< Period

    The staff (are) is kind and willing to help : Yes
    We at ResearchCentre have spoken to a lot of customer service people with hosting companies, sometimes they are really nice but don't have a clue what they are talking about, other times they tend to be disrespectful and rude. (With) At WebHostingBuzz they know what they are talking about and what's more important, they are kind!

    Wide range of plans: Yes
    With plans ranging from $4.00 USD to $35.00 USD you won't break the bank in any sense, WebHostingBuzz will not force you into a massive package, and you can choose a plan that best suites your needs. There is a wide range of plans which can be (brought) bought, and each and every plan has great options and great specs.






    I hope this helps, Isaac
     
    ottoisaac, Sep 4, 2007 IP
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