Do you think this advert Title: Cheerleaders & NRL Text: Manly Sea Eagles site, cheerleaders NRL photos, news & discussion. Would work and be a good and suitable one for http://www.silvertails.net? Cheers Daniel
What are some keywords you are targeting? Are you trying to sell something, or just trying to get traffic? You should do some split testing to find what works best.
Yeah, depends on the KWs. Anyway, just try it I'd say. The market will decide whether it works. Keep tweaking it.
impressive adsense blending on the left menu, on the other hand, your add has the word cheerleaders twice and the word picture, so I would click on your add expecting to see some cheerleader pictures, then on your main page you have those cheerleader pictures, im gonna click on them expecting to see a bigger picture and I'm gonna find this "You do not have adequate permissions to view this gallery!", then i will probably leave. Sorry had to be honest.
If you'll forgive me for being blunt, I don't think your ad is going to do a thing for you. To a stranger (someone who's never heard of the Manly Sea Eagles), it's going to mean absolutely nothing. To any admirer/supporter/player/whatever, it will begin to tell them what it's all about -- but only if they get beyond the headline (Cheerleaders and NRL). Even then, it doesn't sound too exciting. More of a jumblement of language than anything. No, you need a complete rewrite on the following lines: 1. Your headline should deal with a benefit (i.e what visitors will get out of clicking on it). 2. The following two lines should clarify and expand on the idea. For example: Update on the Manly Sea Eagles The latest photos, news, headlines, and, oh yes, our cheerleaders. Admittedly, I haven't checked the word count. But there's some sizzle (i.e tease = reasons to click) here, isn't there? And this is opposed to the (bland, uninviting, tasteless?) steak you've come up with! Duncan
Outstanding advice. Exactly what I needed and am looking for. That sounds better to me and sounds like something I would click on. it may actually jsut work. Thank you And to the other posters. Any other advice or ideas?