Hello guys, I'm back again with another video for which I need feedback. http://www.vimeo.com/13830363 It's a promo video for a client of mine. Let me know what you think of the video so far. I consider it to be 90% done. Please be honest, I accept good and bad comments, feel free to say whatever you want. Regards, Eduard
Nice work mate.To rate i would give 7 out of 10. Here are my veiws hope you dont mind - Transitions are good - The image of person at the start can be improved a bit. - A background color will make it more lively. - The phrases and sentence used are hard to understand make them simple.
Overall I think it's nice. Like eyronnn said, the text transitions are very well done. I also agree that even adding a little color would go a long way. It appears that your client's website is mainly red. Red black and white would make an even bolder statement than just the black and white you have now. At the very least add their logo and some color every time the site name appears on screen. I don't know what you are being paid for this project but all the audio could stand to be re-recorded. It sounds like it was done with a cheap microphone and/or compressed too much. Around 1:10 there appears to be either a glitch or the person stuttered when saying 'started'... You do nice, clean work. Keep it up!