Wilt thou review this?

Here's the link, please tell me what you think.

 

Not bad, MFA page?

 

It does look like a MFA page with all of those text and ads... I would reduce the amount of text *if* possible.. especially in the header area.

 

Nice blog. Kind of random topic. Ad placement is meager. I'd suggest placing ads in between the blog posts, for "accidental clicks" if anything.

 

It is pretty bare! And it looks turnkey
I dont know... I think it needs some *BAM

 

I like the site design and theme.

 

Good site, but i don't like the font

 

I had to look up "MFA". I wasn't intended to be a MFA.

 

It is bad when site looks like MFA but in fact isn't.

Perhaps, you'll modify it to be a *real* MFA?

 

Looks good are they all affiliate links?

 

your theme looks good when i looked your site. ihave focused on your adsense

whay dont you use bigger adsense ads on your site? you can get better results on adsense

 

I see the question "So What Is This About?" -- exactly the same question that popped up in my head. Unfortunately, I don't see the answer immediately: no welcome blurb, no short description, no tagline, no nothing

The layout, color scheme, and fonts are pretty good. But I would have added some short explanation of what the site is actually about.

HTH

 

I agree, replacing the silhouette with some t-shirt images would grab your visitors attention quicker. I do like the look of your site, especially the thumbnails.