Will this be a nice heart touching song

Discussion in 'Movies, Music & TV' started by ethan.hunt, Jun 29, 2010.

  1. #1
    If i compose it ?

    "besides you
    my love
    i shan't find another
    who'll give
    peace to my soul
    and indulge me
    i have gone and seen it all
    america, russia, malaysiana
    there wasn't any difference
    they all had some condition
    some asked for my time
    some were fascinated with my face
    some demanded my fidelity
    none wanted my demons
    besides you
    no one else
    wanted my demons
    besides you
    no one else
    shall shade me in the sun
    (the) way you paused
    slightly
    i shan't forget
    all my life
    you said, looking away
    you shall weep in my memory
    i laughed a strange laugh
    but you didn't
    you had a secret in your heart
    why didn't you tell me
    besides you
    none shall tell this
    secret to me
    besides you
    what druid
    has the cure to my ills
    i found today
    a note of yours
    on which you had scribbeled
    a varis shah couplet
    upon reading which
    a teardrop fell
    what was locked in the eye
    was revealed today
    that other than you
    these tears of mine
    won't be kissed by
    none else
    that other than you
    these tears of mine
    will wither in the dust"
     
    ethan.hunt, Jun 29, 2010 IP
  2. haileey.blair

    haileey.blair Peon

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    #2
    The song is nice but does not seems to be heart touching.
     
    haileey.blair, Jun 29, 2010 IP
  3. Sieraza

    Sieraza Guest

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    #3
    Yeah, little bit heart touching .
     
    Sieraza, Jul 15, 2010 IP
  4. jaketwilight

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    #4
    You Raise Me UP, Heal The world, youre not alone..
     
    jaketwilight, Jul 16, 2010 IP
  5. inevitablewilli

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    #5
    I know from where u have pick these lines.
     
    inevitablewilli, Jul 16, 2010 IP
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    A Mere vatan ke Logo.............by album KARGIL.
     
    Nandurbar, Jul 21, 2010 IP
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    #7
    yup it is a nice song.
     
    paisafreesms, Jul 21, 2010 IP
  8. libidinous

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    Sounds nice to me.
     
    libidinous, Jul 21, 2010 IP