Will this article be accepted?

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  1. #1
    This is the first paragraph, but in your opinion do you think most article directories would accept this or not?
    Thanks.
     
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  2. choicefreedom2000

    choicefreedom2000 Peon

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    My Dear Friend

    Definitely its fine you can use it but need only one change.

    1) Instead of using a word "product" use it as methods or ways or tricks.

    No one will reject this damn sure

    Cool Mate and Enjoy your Day

    Dashanan Sharma
     
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  3. chaitanya.seo

    chaitanya.seo Banned

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    #3
    Hi Dashanan,
    You are not getting what is the idea of article,
    How could u describe a product as a trick or methods.

    Let's take simple example... In our India, there is "Fair and Handsome" Cream.

    They are marketing their product as Product, nothing like trick or methods,

    Have you seen on television any time, that any fairness cream marketing their products as Tricks or methods?

    You need to be more clear..

    The article content is good, and People may take time to read it.


    Thanks,
    Chaitanya
     
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  4. choicefreedom2000

    choicefreedom2000 Peon

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    My Dear Friend

    First thing is that if you are not aware about the marketing techniques then please for god sake its better to sit quitely in one corner and look what's going on.

    I am not proud of myself but i am 23 year young guy and have read more than 350 ebooks with 100s of pages so definitely there is some logic in that and if you can find that logic its goods otherwise work hard and then compete with me. My website stands 1st position in google.com for 50 keywords. As i dont want to disclose it here but can definitely prove this.

    Cool Mate and Enjoy your Day

    Dashanan Sharma
     
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  5. chaitanya.seo

    chaitanya.seo Banned

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    #5
    Not again,

    I never compete with any one.

    Just you were missing the way, i was trying to take on right path,

    But, Now you have jumped in to River with your bicycle.

    See website http://www.cygnet-infotech.com

    Must be you can not beet my website...

    Results, in just thousands of competition you may have got...

    But in millions and billions, you far away, buddy...

    This is not the right place to talk with you...

    One more Suggestion to you,,,


    See what people commenting about your post.
    Dear brother and Sisters, first comment from a paki boy and another do not want see you as mate,,,
    so sad,
    But i have defend you over there, cz you are an Indian...
    That thread in which i defend you was posted by may be Sonal.... and today itself.
    View that,
    Please let me know did i have made any mistake there?
     
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    Clear what you said. I am an indian though.
     
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    This is perfectly fine ... Go ahead .... All the best
     
    Bob Smith, Apr 23, 2008 IP
  8. chaitanya.seo

    chaitanya.seo Banned

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    #8
    Lets forget every thing.
    and don't make any comments on him.
    He just misunderstood or may be some thing else...
    Just go through, here u will come to know every thing.
    http://forums.digitalpoint.com/showthread.php?t=808827

    No comments after this.
     
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  9. Funster

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    #9
    Some article directrories are picky, some aren't. Regardless, you should write in grammatically correct English if you are trying to reach English readers. The real problem is the paragraph doesn't really say anything interesting or compelling about the subject, even if it were cleaned up.

    If you have nothing specific or new to say about a particular topic, pick another. You might be well advised to hire someone to do the work.
     
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    It really depends which article directory you are submitting to. There is a sense of excessive keyword stuffing there. A decent article directory like EzineArticles will not like it.
     
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