Which of these ads is better?

Discussion in 'Google' started by mafiaboy, Mar 12, 2008.

  1. #1
    So I've been thinking what my add should look like. Let's say for example I'm selling an ebook on ...ummm love for eg.

    19$ - Women's Love Guide
    Get ready to learn to
    approach the hottest chick in town!

    OR

    How To Get Women Easily
    Get ready to learn to
    approach the hottest chick in town!

    One ad informs them that they are buying something, but the other doesn't. Is it better to make the visitors know they will click on a link which will try to sell them something, or shouldn't I?:rolleyes:
     
    mafiaboy, Mar 12, 2008 IP
  2. lzy

    lzy Peon

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    #2
    The 2nd one.
     
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  3. mafiaboy

    mafiaboy Active Member

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    #3
    wont they just leave after seeing they have to pay?
     
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    willhaynes Active Member

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    #4
    I would say the second one.

    at least in the second one they will actually click the link, instead of the first one where they will see that you have to pay.

    at least that is from my own personal "ad clicking" habits. :)
     
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  5. mafiaboy

    mafiaboy Active Member

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    #5
    ughh + rep to someone who is a webmaster and knows from experience? Not saying you gave bad advice, its just i need proffesional opinions.
     
    mafiaboy, Mar 12, 2008 IP
  6. dpking

    dpking Peon

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    #6
    This is great ;) cuz this is attractive one !!
     
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  7. alokverma

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    #7
    I love the second one
     
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  8. jameswithers

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    #8
    I agree that the 2nd one is best, but the ad copy seems way too far-fetched to even attract its target audience. I suggest you don't overdo it. I'd say something along the lines of "capture the interest of beautiful women" is more realistic.
     
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  9. mediapro

    mediapro Well-Known Member

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    #9
    Even though I don't think any of the two would get that many clicks, the second one would definitely would do better over the first one.
     
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  10. eternal_seo

    eternal_seo Active Member

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    #10
    I think the title of the second ad seems more responsive, but you need to make sure that you include the price in the description. You can also use other titles as jameswithers mentioned. When you include the price, your ROI will improve, and in that way it will increase your quality score as well.
     
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    #11
    The second one is more attractive
     
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    anisbd Active Member

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    #12
    i agree with 2nd
     
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  13. trichnosis

    trichnosis Prominent Member

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    #13
    another vote for second one is here
     
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    Get Women Easily-$19
    I like this.
     
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    #15
    If you target people who are not native English speaker You should choose second ;)
     
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  16. comfr

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    #16
    I agree with that.

     
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    rw_essen Active Member

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    #17
    comfr, sound's a little bit "aggresive" :p

    "How To Get Women Easily" sound much better. :)
     
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  18. mafiaboy

    mafiaboy Active Member

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    lol guys the titles suck on purpose . I just want to know if it better to include a price or not in the description.

    If so , should the price be displayed in the description or the title?
     
    mafiaboy, Mar 13, 2008 IP
  19. angilina

    angilina Notable Member

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    #19
    The second one is decent.
     
    angilina, Mar 14, 2008 IP