Which is a better slogשn? - Pls help me pick

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  1. originator

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    #21
    The first one, like Refreshed said about the second one: Bundle of keywords
     
    originator, Mar 14, 2009 IP
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    It seems to me that by using the word alternative, you are saying to your readers that your site wouldn't be the first pick for free stuff. Maybe you should find another word to replace alternative to seem more convincing and stronger.
     
    lilac22, Mar 15, 2009 IP
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