Which is a better slogשn? - Pls help me pick

Discussion in 'Copywriting' started by gclass, Mar 4, 2009.

  1. #1
    I am looking for a slogan for free stuff and coupons directory,
    the URL is ALT 6 dot com,

    I came up with :
    1.your alternative source for free stuff
    2. free stuff alternative source

    which one is better? why?

    do you have better one?
     
    gclass, Mar 4, 2009 IP
  2. Online Writer

    Online Writer Peon

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    #2
    Out of those two, I like the first one.
     
    Online Writer, Mar 4, 2009 IP
  3. alain94040

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    #3
    I vote for the first one.

    Or you could say "the free stuff alternative". or "Choose free stuff".
     
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  4. WalterA

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    #4
    I go with " alternative seek(like 6) 4 free stuff " or " seek 4 free stuff "

    good luckkkk :)
     
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  5. shekharriyat

    shekharriyat Active Member

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    #5
    First one is better but only like this "alternative source for free stuff"
     
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  6. lifeplayer

    lifeplayer Notable Member

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    #6
    2. free stuff alternative source - more standard
     
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  7. quickincome

    quickincome Banned

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    #7
    I like the first one but how about this ?

    Alternative for freebies
     
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  8. shewrites

    shewrites Active Member

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    #8
    The first one looks and sounds better. You could also go:

    The Alternative Source for Free Stuff
    The Alternative Source for Freebies
     
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  9. gclass

    gclass Active Member

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    #9
    Thank you all,
    as for now I think I will pick a variation of the 1st one

    Appreciate your help,
    Kobi
     
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  10. GeeOne

    GeeOne Well-Known Member

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    #10
    How about 'Right source for free stuff'
     
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    #11
    I find them both rather cumbersome. I like GeeOne's "Right Source for Free Stuff" It's just more ... peppy.

    I recommend you brainstorm with some fun, simple ideas like:

    Free Stuff - Cheap and Easy ... Free Stuff for the Rest of US ...
     
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    #12
    But I like the second one better. You should put a bigger emphasis on the word FREE. It will get the attention of more people. :)
     
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  13. GeeOne

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    Thanx for appreciation.
     
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    #14
    go with number 1!!!
     
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    #15
    How about this one ?

    Excellent Place for Free Stuff!

    Regards,

    RightMan
     
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  16. SFNUM8

    SFNUM8 Active Member

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    #16
    I like the First one better
     
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    #17
    I like this one ''Right source for free stuff''
     
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  18. gclass

    gclass Active Member

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    #18
    Hi All,

    Many thanks for your help, The site is still under construction,
    so I keep playing with it for now.
    I will post here what I choose when I do that,

    Kobi
     
    gclass, Mar 14, 2009 IP
  19. Lakshmi SEO

    Lakshmi SEO Well-Known Member

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    #19
    The Alternative Source for Free Stuff is good solgan
     
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  20. Refresher

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    #20
    The first one.
    The second one doesn't seem like English, it's just like putting the keywords together, thats all :p
     
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