What's wrong with my landing page?

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  2. GrandRoyal

    GrandRoyal Member

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    Your page has a video and not very professional but the page looks good best way to make money is to collect email ids of people who land on your website and offer them free tips on diet and keep them mailing using an autoresponder service. Sure way to make good number of sales.

    Also there are many software available that can drive you more traffic to your offer.
     
    GrandRoyal, Apr 22, 2011 IP
  3. blogaboutnothin

    blogaboutnothin Peon

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    I suggest using something like forum marketing to get free traffic to your site. GrandRoyal is correct about collecting emails. Give out free reports on dieting is a very good idea.
     
    blogaboutnothin, Apr 22, 2011 IP
  4. anwaraa

    anwaraa Active Member

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    The page is very plain looking (as it has a blog format). I would go for a professionally designed sales page with stunning graphics and images.
     
    anwaraa, May 9, 2011 IP
  5. Karma-Police

    Karma-Police Greenhorn

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    At first when i enter your site i see that there is no comments or feedback on the product. It leaves me to wonder why no one has bought your product and hence makes me not want to risk my money and try. Your first few sells are going to be the hardest but if you start getting feedback into your page with satisfied people then that is when you will make the sells. You should offer a copy or something so someone can provided your site with feedback
     
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    Well I personally don't like to read alot so other than it may be a bit much to read nothing is wrong with it. It doesn't look like the most prettiest page I've seen and it could be better but there isn't anything wrong with it.
     
    moneymagnet, May 9, 2011 IP
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    26 minutes video? Who is going to watch that?
     
    centarec, May 9, 2011 IP
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    People have short attention spans, so it's no wonder this page not performing as expected, since it's not scannable at all;
    at first glance, visitors just see a huge chunk of text, which makes almost everyone flee.

    You're wasting money sending PPC traffic without properly optimizing the pitch.

    What you need :

    Catchy Headlines (not just at the beginning, but throughout the text)
    Compelling arguments in bullet points (people skim through the text looking for good points)
    Use the space above the fold wisely (most people won't scroll down unless you give them valid reasons to).

    You should get rid of:

    Large chunks of text (they scare visitors away)
    Verbose arguments (try to keep the writing simple and succinct)
     
    Smitten, May 11, 2011 IP
  9. sundeep.shetty03

    sundeep.shetty03 Peon

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    Ur page is not much attractive try to make some deep changes on it ..........!!!!!!!
     
    sundeep.shetty03, May 11, 2011 IP
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    The very first mistake people do is not to have a .COM. That is a big mistake.
    But yours is an affiliate link page So it is not a very big, but a problem anyway.

    The second point being the video is painfully long . >25minutes is more than a soap opera for gods sake.
    And if you make a video try to show your face and your body , I mean your niche expects you to be.
    Maybe you have incorporated them but not in the first 10 seconds that I watched.

    Get an autoresponder.
    If you can afford Adwords then why not Aweber.
     
    lazyfrog, Jun 7, 2011 IP
  11. xixi12

    xixi12 Peon

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    It looks ok to me, especially since you redirected it to the main sales page, and i agree the video is too long
     
    xixi12, Jun 7, 2011 IP