What You say about my website!!

thanks for your honest review ...will try to improve more.

 

The body is nice but i dislike the text slogan on top.. maybe a banner wd be better

 

Okay, I do love the site, it's self-explanatory and appealing it it's design.
But I do have the following suggestions:
A) You're going to need to hire a native English writer, to re-write everything written in legnth. It's extreamly off-putting for someone who is native to the English language to read something like this, and feel secure or comfortable with it. it drastically takes away from the otherwise great overall feel of the site.
I'm taking on projects starting again this evening, around 5PM (about 6 hours from now), if you'd like, you can PM me, if it's only a little bit of writing, such as the home-page that needs to be proofed and re-written, I'll do it for free, all I'd ask in return is an iTrader. However if it's more then that, and in any way time consuming, I'd still only charge you a very small amount to complete the entire re-write. Just PM me if you're interested. It will really help your site out A LOT, to get the grammar and misc. use of language correct. it will make your viewers feel more secure and comfortable while visiting your site.

My only other suggestion, is that your center font/size is a bit too small, but rather than change the size, you may want to consider changing the font itself to something more well defined, that way you can keep the general spacing and style, but the viewers will still be able to see your text more clearly.

*Otherwise, great site man, keep up the good work! :')

-Tenoshadow7

 

Its ok. I like Home page. Need a bit to do on content.

 

Thanks for your keen observation...will surely pm you..I appreciate you for your efforts!!

 

i have waiting your site for over 5 minutes,, well maybe your site was heavy or my connection was slowpoke :lol:

 

I think this web is very nice and like it maybe you can add form comment in this site