what would the TITLE for this flayer?

Discussion in 'General Business' started by nshadab, Nov 27, 2008.

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  1. #1
    Hello guys,
    I am planning to send flayer about my service to my OPT-IN.
    We offer virtual assistance services.

    All i am looking forward to get a good subject line for this email flayer.....

    Hozz this?

    "Virtual Assistance Service Proposal"

    and what about your suggestions? so that one this may catch ones eye....and person may open this and read out as well.

    Thanks in advance for your help.
     
    nshadab, Nov 27, 2008 IP
  2. yousellstuff1

    yousellstuff1 Active Member

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    #2
    i feel like
    is not the greatest way for people to notice your new service. It looks more like an ad if anything.

    Maybe Virtual Assistance Helper or something like that
     
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  3. nshadab

    nshadab Well-Known Member

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    Yes, i know that its really hard to get people's eye on this ad.
    but i have to try hard so that atleast 50% of the recipient open this ad and we can spread the words about our services.

    Or may be

    "Your Online Virtual Assistance Helper"

    How about this one?
     
    nshadab, Nov 27, 2008 IP
  4. mentos

    mentos Prominent Member

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    I don't think i will open that email with that kind of subject.
    But i will open if you put your subject this way
    "Busy?Need help doing anything online?"
    I will surely read those email
     
    mentos, Nov 27, 2008 IP
  5. nshadab

    nshadab Well-Known Member

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    Damn good.

    create curiosity, and then people will open that.

    any more suggestions?
     
    nshadab, Nov 27, 2008 IP
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    aspire Well-Known Member

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    Not catchy. A probing question type of sentence at times make the reader feel interested at times.
     
    aspire, Nov 27, 2008 IP