Just Curious as to what you think makes a great about us Page? I have attached something I have written for you to critique and pick holes in.
Grammer issues I picke up on, will sort them out later - English was not my strong suit at school. So I shouldn't use abbreviations for my country name = New Zealand (NZ)?
You may find this unethical, but many hosting companies use stock images of server rooms and business people. Photos are always good on an about us page.
The about us page must be able to give a strong feeling about the company. Like inciting the people reading it to stick with you. Error free and use of stock image to give it a stronger "personality" and written in a perfect language
You really want to equip every business in NZ with a website? Seems like a rather lofty goal. I don't know, but that statement sounds a bit "amateur" to me because its unrealistic and not very focused. Perhaps it should be re-worded to say: "...and it is our goal to equip businesses in NZ with one ..." Just my thoughts. And I agree what amedia said about the images of people - that will really help.