What is your opinion and suggestions about this domain sales letter to end user?

Discussion in 'Domain Names' started by recession, Mar 22, 2009.

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    Subject: Beautiful opportunity for you! * lovepatient.com

    Greetings to [BUYER NAME],
    [BUYER ADDRESS].

    lovepatient.com is for sale.
    love is the best medicine
    love makes patient life beautiful.

    Who lives without love?Do you live without love?Do you live without love of your mother,father,sister,brother,relatives,friends,society,
    animals,birds,nature and universe?If mother does not love her child,how does that child grow?Love is necessary to live.If doctor/physician treats her/his patient without love,patient will die.Love is there in our lives.

    Approximate average monthly number of search queries matching "love patient" that were performed on Google and the search network over a recent 12-month period: 40,500[Excluding other search engines search volume].Search volume is extremely important! The more people that search for a term the more value a domain name has that matches exactly to the searched term.It is a proven SEO[Search Engine Optimization] fact that having a domain name that matches an exact matched search term greatly helps in SERP's[Search Engine Results Pages]. .com.Search Volume is useful in Search Engine Optimization of this domain to get free traffic from search engines to this website.This is the exact match search volume,indexing in main page for these keywords in search engines is not a big problem,if you develop this domain.Think about the free traffic after development from natural search results.This domain value will be increased more than 50000 USD after 1 year because of traffic only,think about other factors beauty of domain name,...etc,if you consider all these factors how much value it will be.Just i need money now so i am selling this domain now otherwise i will develop this domain.

    If you observe the domain name,this domain has 2 meanings,love as a verb shows importance of love to patient,love as a noun shows someone depressed because lack of love and he/she became "love patient".If you develop this domain for health care site,visitor will be interested in both ways and comes to your site.

    If you develop this domain for blood eyes kidney and money donation site,donors will easily donate and attract and like to donate because of this domain name.

    Most people remember this domain name easily and most people coming back to your site.

    This domain name has .Com extension,the most people prefer this extension.This is the top and valuable extension of all extensions.

    I am expecting NNNN USD [NNNN$] for this domain.

    Let me know opinion with love whether you would be interested in purchasing domain and
    we can then proceed to discuss further details.

    If you have questions, please contact me by email ([ ]).

    Sincerely with love,
    [YOUR NAME],
    [YOUR ADDRESS].

    If this correspondence has arrived at the wrong department, please pass it on to the appropriate staff member.
     
    recession, Mar 22, 2009 IP
  2. zeekstern

    zeekstern Active Member

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    #2
    Sounds like they got suckered into buying that domain name and are now trying to pass it off to someone else (you). :))
    There are NO searches for exact phrase "love patient". There are some for "love is patient".

    Think I would pass on that one.

    Zeek
     
    zeekstern, Mar 22, 2009 IP
  3. tobycoke

    tobycoke Well-Known Member

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    The longer the sales letter the weaker the name. I'd try to cut it down to 3-4 powerful lines.
     
    tobycoke, Mar 22, 2009 IP
  4. infoconsultants

    infoconsultants Peon

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    Totally Agree with tobycoke. Keep it short and simple. 3-4 lines should do the trick. My sales letter is just 4-5 lines mostly and it works if the end user is really interested in your domain

    Thanks and Good luck
     
    infoconsultants, Mar 22, 2009 IP
  5. evelyn.mendes

    evelyn.mendes Peon

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    I agree..you should shorten it a bit!
     
    evelyn.mendes, Mar 23, 2009 IP
  6. chandan123

    chandan123 Prominent Member

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    normally flags as spam or virus message
     
    chandan123, Mar 23, 2009 IP
  7. SiberForum

    SiberForum Banned

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    Good domain name. I suppose that trying to sell that on the SEDO auctions will be useful for you
    Good luck
     
    SiberForum, Mar 23, 2009 IP
  8. aloksharma

    aloksharma Well-Known Member

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    I suggest you develop this domain, add some good articles and earn from ads.

    As regards to the letter, it surely looks like a spam. BTW, to whom you will be sending the emails?
     
    aloksharma, Mar 23, 2009 IP