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What is everyones opinion on my new page?

Discussion in 'Websites' started by johned2222, Mar 10, 2015.

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    Hello
    I am running a 30 day body transformation challenge. Before I start it I wanted to get peoples constructive criticism on my webpage I had designed for it.
    I am new to layouts and the best way things should look visually to get the most conversions.
    Please leave your feedback on this page-
    Tunnel Vision Fitness

    Kind regards
    John

    Hello
    the URL is http://www.tvisionfitness.com/30-days-challenge/ please give me any constructive crititsm
     
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    johned2222, Mar 10, 2015 IP
  2. tones

    tones Member

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    Hi John,

    I think you will find it hard to get people to join this.

    What are your plans for marketing this plus May 1 the winner will be announce. Which is not much time for this to promote.

    Your add to cart is $10.95 on your site it mentions $9.95. Plus the link does not open to a new window so how are they going to enter their details if the page is gone.

    Looking at your site for Terms and Conditions there is no link.

    Good luck with this but I think the time frame doesn't help you.

    Tony
     
    tones, Mar 11, 2015 IP
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    AndrewRxP Greenhorn

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    Pretty good looking and informative.
     
    AndrewRxP, Mar 12, 2015 IP
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    praetserge Notable Member

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    hahahahahaah yeah, very informative as it shows 404-error "Page not found".
     
    praetserge, Mar 14, 2015 IP