hey guys i need some help about my landing page.what does it need to convert?please criticise me as much as you can my lanidng page is http://renewable-energy4home.blogspot.com/
The first impression is that it is incomplete or under construction. You must change the header section (Top portion) of your page. It seems that some links are missing here. You must remove the third, small box (Oval shaped, with no image or text within it). Another problem is that Top text is popping out of the box. This text must be in one line. If you can increase the width of text portion, on entire page, it will also give the page more eye catching look.
I like the colors...but you should center things more, underline things, bold, and make it grab the reader when they come to your site. Also, consider getting a video or something on there. Good luck!
Hello, I noticed a couple of things. First thing is minor, but it still affects how the page is percieved. You need to Insert a space between the two sentences in the second paragraph: Secondly, your page looks too plain. It looks like someone quickly threw together a blogger page. I would sugest finding a good blogger template. There are hundreds and hundreds of free templates and they are very easy to install and setup. This will make your lander look more like a real webpage and it will give it that extra pop. Just google: free blogger templates I'm sure you can find a good one to compliment your niche. -Good luck
Looks too plain, and needs centralising. There is nothing to catch the eye. I would also make the text larger, and have an eye catching headline, and also a sub headline. I would move the how it's made images down, and have the call to action above the fold.