Hi, ive just set up this landing page and i was waundering what you thaught, i think i needs pictures but i thaught i best get your advice first. www.easy-money.me Thanks Danny.
Ok you definitely need to shorten it, make the font bigger, double space it, add some pictures, put some main points in big bold letters etc. Right now it is a massive chunk of text which noone is going to bother to read. Remember, the first impression your website gives will determine whether the visitor will be bothered to read the info on it. And to create a good first impression the webiste has to be well structured, colorful (dont overdo) and feature nice graphics. These are the first things the visitor sees. You might have a million dollar info on your website but if its just a big chunk of text people will close it within 3 seconds.
You're going to want a nice bold header, a proper call to action above the fold, a properly structured review e.g. subheaders/bullet points/indents etc.
You really need to organize the text better. You need to split your text -Split it into proper paragraphs -Put a nice catchy headline -Put an adequate subtitle before each important paragraph. -Put a bigger call of action
Thank you i will impliment this information into the landing page tomorrow Anyone else have anything to add?
Do everything mentioned above and don't over sell either. Put your own personal opinions in it and you may want to cloak your links cheers!
Use a HTML cloak, direct your links to a page like www.easy-money.me/recommends/product-name.html. On that HTML page add the following code before between the <head> and </head> tags. <meta http-equiv="refresh" content="0;http://HOPLINKHERE.COM" /> You can add any other test to the body, for example "Refreshing please wait...".
Hey guys, i have updated the page with the ideas you surgested what do you think now? http://www.easy-money.me/ Do you think i need to add the price? or just let them continue to the sale page befor finding out? Also do you think its a good or bad idea showing the 60 day money back guarentee? Is there anything else i should add? Thanks Dan.
yep now its looks nice man Do you think i need to add the price? or just let them continue to the sale page befor finding out? in my point of view let them continue Also do you think its a good or bad idea showing the 60 day money back guarentee? its good, but its up-to you good luck man
Nice regulated fonts, easy to read. My advice is the bottom "Join Now" should be put on a line below and centered, with maybe a more bold effect like text shadow, maybe even have it as a graphic with alternate text?
In fact I haven't read it all but it might be highly converting.. If I were you I would change the font, change the header, make a hot call-to-action and really as far as I know Money Maverick Money Makers is a system that needs to be reviewed .. Cheers
I thinks is better if you may put more detail about that product, please check out my landing page on reviews.almugni.com