What do you think of this logo?

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by fade, May 9, 2007.

  1. #1
    tell me your thoughts/suggestions and things i can do to improve on this logo!

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    constructive criticism is welcome! :)
     
    fade, May 9, 2007 IP
  2. mitcharr

    mitcharr Notable Member

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    It Quite Nice. I Think the reflection should fade away, rather than being blurred. Also the .net should be a different color, and not overlapping the Y. Maybe the icecream could be cleaned up around the edges, looks a bit rough. But i think its a very nice logo
     
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  3. fade

    fade Well-Known Member

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    #3
    not bad for my first logo ever?

    not even lying... lol :D
     
    fade, May 9, 2007 IP
  4. mitcharr

    mitcharr Notable Member

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    #4
    so thats your first logo? wow thats great then, i would definitely fix up the reflection bit, as its the most notible
     
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  5. marioland

    marioland Banned

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    #5
    Definitely the NET is not fitting right there. Other than that, looks good especially for a first attempt!
     
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  6. 8everything

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    #6
    The logo would look better without the black borders around the ice cream cone.. so it can match the text to the right.
     
    8everything, May 9, 2007 IP
  7. AffiliateD

    AffiliateD Guest

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    #7
    its nice but you might wanna make .net a little more brighter to see.
     
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  8. zach606

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    #8
    I agree with the people who are saying the .NET does not totally fit with the design. You could try making it horizontal like the rest of the text, under the NDY of candy. Or change the colour and keep it where it is. Just a couple ideas.

    Really great design though! I am impressed!
     
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  9. fej

    fej Active Member

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    #9
    Not bad for a first logo! Practce makes perfect! Just keep 'em coming! :D
     
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  10. rahmat

    rahmat Active Member

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    I can't see the NET very well.
     
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  11. ouromarketing

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    #11
    I don't like the font choice, but hey --- congrats with your first logo!
     
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  12. Jake Howard

    Jake Howard Well-Known Member

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    #12
    Irrespective of what the logo looks like you should be proud of what you have achieved. You have used a lot of different styles and techniques in your logo, that most would have no idea how to do. You will be able to use this experience on future logos.

    Cheers

    Jake
    RaceTheAd.com
     
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  13. jiminy465

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    #13
    Looks good i would personally make the icecream cone graphics more smooth so it ties in with the writing, bold outline colours.
     
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    #14
    nice logo , good work
     
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  15. KeithCash

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    #15
    I agree with mitcharr and the .net is not very viewable with the eye.

    Good job, coming along nice.

    Cheers
     
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    #16
    That background is very high tech related to the ice cream, does not make me want to eat ice cream. But its still nice for its use.
     
    login, May 10, 2007 IP
  17. Otero SEO

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    It could be better, I think maybe changing the font could work.
     
    Otero SEO, May 10, 2007 IP