What do you think of this design?

Discussion in 'HTML & Website Design' started by rochow, Jul 6, 2007.

  1. #1
    What do you think of this design? I made it in about 1 and a half hours. It's for one of my new sites, a bidding directory.

    Comments on colour, layout, and aswell as general comments and suggestions for improvements will be appreciated :)

    Please forgive the big ugly green blocks with buttons written on them, they'll be for sponsors who have a button on the site (88 x 31 is the standard size?)

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    Thanks!

    I am also pretty busy with other work, so if anyone would like to code it feel free to send me a quote (to xhtml and css, I'll do the integration)

    Note: I just got my 7th blog of rep, be happy to pass some on to those who are helpful :D
     
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  2. bacanze

    bacanze Peon

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    #2
    Well the template is certainly appropriate for 'Shout Links' if you know what I mean, the background + the clarity of the title text emphasises the whole template, especially the title, also the font is very clear and easy to read, although I would increase the spacing slightly been the characters which make up each sites description.

    If there was one thing you could do to improve, I would say experiement with the sidewide buttons, like change there opacity, colour, apply effects etc, they can be improved me thinks.
     
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    #3
    I agree. The right side buttons look plain compared to the other buttons. And the text spacing could be increased just a little.

    Overall: crisp, clean and not too busy. Nice job.
     
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  4. genx_wan

    genx_wan Well-Known Member

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    #4
    The template is no doubt a piece of good work ;).(assuming you have done it within one and half hour)

    But sstill it needs a little makeover , as bacanze and bric said sitewide buttons needs a little attention .

    8/10 :D .
     
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  5. rochow

    rochow Notable Member

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    #5
    Do you mean the buttons on the right hand side in that column?

    I'm not using those buttons, they will be replaced with buttons for sponsoring sites :)
     
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    #6
    all looks good... maybe make your own icon folder would be great :)
     
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  7. 8everything

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    #7
    I like it! However, the site needs some more red :p try changing the blue "some sites" text to red instead and see how it looks ;)
     
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  8. ansi

    ansi Well-Known Member

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    #8
    the image isn't loading for me. any way that you can attach it to your post or provide a text link to it?
     
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  9. rochow

    rochow Notable Member

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    #9
    I am SO happy to hear that :)

    I'm actually trying to ftp some files to the server and it must be down or something, its sooooooooooooooo slow.

    The link is www.themeoutlet.com/ShoutLinks.jpg

    It should be back up soon. Works for my friend fine though, just not me or you! :(
     
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    ansi Well-Known Member

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    #10
    it looks alright to me. not my style but it doesn't look bad. only thing that i see wrong with it, is the background. that and i agree with 8everything (once again hehe) about it needing more red. websites in general should distribute colors evenly across the board. helps to get a better "flow" into the design if you follow with what i am saying. looks great other than that though bud.
     
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  11. genx_wan

    genx_wan Well-Known Member

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    #11
    If those buttons are going to be replaced by sponsor sites,
    Than i must say the design is perfect and unique :) .

    Good luck.
     
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  12. rochow

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    #12
    I'll change the "some link" title to red and see how it turns out.

    EDIT:

    [​IMG]
     
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    #13
    I like it!

    :)
     
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    #14
    Guys in your opinion what is better:
    - Version 1 with the green links
    - Version 2 with the red links
     
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    #15
    not bad

    i would make a clear seperation between the listed sites, maybe a faint dotted line or soemthing
     
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    #16
    much better but for some reason the big green boxes to the left are buggin me. looking better though bud :)
     
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  17. rochow

    rochow Notable Member

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    #17
    Because they look out of place due to the effect and size of them?

    I'm going to experiment with a different style. I tried changing the colour (same style) but they all looked pretty sucky, green was the best one.
     
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    #18
    yeah, i think the size has a lot to do with it. honestly i'd probably just get rid of them completely and put a seperator between each site and description.
     
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    #19
    I need them/something to have the amount of money they paid, and "place bid"

    So for example:

    $10
    Place Bid!
     
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    ansi Well-Known Member

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    #20
    here's just an idea that i tossed together for you. another route to try maybe? i dunno. what do you think?

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