What do you think of this banner?

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by melol2, Aug 11, 2009.

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  1. #1
    It's not much, but I am trying to create a simple banner to put at the top of my new website. What do you think about it? Should I keep working on another one? Or is this one fine?


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    melol2, Aug 11, 2009 IP
  2. Yeah

    Yeah Well-Known Member

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    #2
    Nice, but do you have only this iPhonesRaid ? maybe more text ?
     
    Yeah, Aug 11, 2009 IP
  3. dinglehead

    dinglehead Peon

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    Looks good but my eyes were immediately drawn to the extra spacing between the icons in hte column next to the letter 'd'
     
    dinglehead, Aug 11, 2009 IP
  4. melol2

    melol2 Active Member

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    [​IMG]

    Did I fix the problems you were talking about?
     
    melol2, Aug 11, 2009 IP
  5. lifeplayer

    lifeplayer Notable Member

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    #5
    Your banner is good enough, maybe you can make the background more transparent
     
    lifeplayer, Aug 11, 2009 IP
  6. Norebbo

    Norebbo Active Member

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    Reducing the spacing definitely helped. But to be honest, I can't tell if it's supposed to read:

    "iPhoner Aid" or "iPhone Raid"

    Little bit unclear to me.
     
    Norebbo, Aug 11, 2009 IP
  7. Tiger039

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    #7
    The banner looks a little busy but fits in with what your trying to go....not bad at all! Whenever I create a hearder or banner I also like to include under the title some kind of a sub line or discription of the website

    Cheers
    Gary
     
    Tiger039, Aug 11, 2009 IP
  8. theivo

    theivo Well-Known Member

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    It's OK, i like this banner. Use it as it is at your site :)
    Good work!
     
    theivo, Aug 11, 2009 IP
  9. sheryonline

    sheryonline Well-Known Member

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    #9
    nice ...its gud !
    keep it up
    thanx
    Shery !
     
    sheryonline, Aug 11, 2009 IP
  10. nethelp

    nethelp Peon

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    #10
    I am a banner designer (when I have time) and I don't see the "Call to action" on your banner. Yes, it is simple, you said you need a simple banner, but either way should have that "call to action" that drive people to your site.

    Good luck! ...hope my feedback is appreciated. :)
     
    nethelp, Aug 12, 2009 IP
  11. drdavisjr

    drdavisjr Peon

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    looks good to me.
    I do agree with nethelp.
    good luck
     
    drdavisjr, Aug 13, 2009 IP
  12. 2advance

    2advance Well-Known Member

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    Nice banner design and I accept the new recently corrected with less space between the characters. Good..
     
    2advance, Aug 13, 2009 IP
  13. netdriver788

    netdriver788 Well-Known Member

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    #13
    It looks very pleasant to me.Goodluck.
     
    netdriver788, Aug 13, 2009 IP