What do you think of my website now?

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  1. #1
    Hello

    I have just editd ALL of the text on my site and hopfully fixed all the bugs and broken links. I have also now protected te members area.

    What do you think of the content and stucture of the site?

    Can you find any spelling errors?

    Tell me what you think.

    Thanks guys
     
    Sleepydude, Oct 26, 2008 IP
  2. Project Mobius

    Project Mobius Peon

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    WHICH is your site to be reviewed?
     
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  3. kingofsanda

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    #3
    You did not give us the url of the site you would like us to review.
     
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  4. kidtechguru

    kidtechguru Active Member

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    Where's the URL? There are 3 sites in your signature, which one is it?
     
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  5. Sleepydude

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  6. lycos

    lycos Well-Known Member

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    #6
    There are still room for improvement to add more content and to correct the abundance of spelling mistakes still present. Other than that, the design and structure look ok.
     
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  7. buntoo

    buntoo Well-Known Member

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    #7
    Site's pretty fast.
    though i would add more details on how the software works.
    cause there are 1000's if not more websites that unlock the iphone. why should one pick you?
    design is decent. but i would work on content and detailed descriptions..
    also try and find some free tools for the iphone u can give away for free. visitors love free stuff..
     
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  8. kubo76

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    Design is nice.
    It is not clear what is link and what is not.
     
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  9. Project Mobius

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    #9
    i notice the two rounded corner containers are kind of overlapping each other in the middle there...
     
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  10. ruifelipe

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    #10
    I tested your site in ffox, ie6/7, safari, opera and chrome. fix the two rounded corner and take a look at the footer (there is a white space).
     
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  11. Sleepydude

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    What is this white space? I cannot see this on ie or chrome or on safari on my iphone?

    I would like to make the site perfect so if you can let me know so i can fix it

    Thanks
     
    Sleepydude, Oct 28, 2008 IP
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    #12
    where is ur URL, let me know how i review ur site???
     
    masmrt, Oct 28, 2008 IP
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  14. Sleepydude

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    The URL is www.freemyiphone.co.uk

    Thanks
     
    Sleepydude, Oct 28, 2008 IP
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    terranox Banned

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    #15
    the header image its not to sharp and clean and as a result makes it look not very professional.
     
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    #16
    The overall site appearance is good. The colors you used were matching. i viewed your site using mozilla firefox version 2.0 and it loaded up pretty fast.
     
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  17. overseasplease

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    #17
    Design's nice and simple. Looks good. Shouldn't have any problems selling this one.
     
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  18. Marry Parker

    Marry Parker Well-Known Member

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    #18
    Looks good , i think you will be able to sell it. Good Luck:)
     
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  19. Sleepydude

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    #19
    I have fixed this now, i am modifying banner later tonight to give a better explanation of what the site is selling.

    Thanks for the comments guys there all helping
     
    Sleepydude, Oct 29, 2008 IP
  20. ace.brian

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    #20
    Design simple and nice! You have good logo and good pictures! May be try to change this white background? But first of all you need to add more and more good content!
     
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