Hi everyone, just looking for advice on my weight loss webpage on squidoo... it's for the scarsdale diet to go along with my diet website. It's my first squidoo lens so just wondering what people thought. Thanks-
Good. You could do better if the banner can be brought down from the top. However, I liked you official site http://www.scarsdalediet.com/. I am running a website similar top your theme. If you are interested, it is here>> http://www.healthgenie.org
as one who doesn't know that the Scarsdale Diet is, I think you need a big obvious link somewhere to a page that explains the basics. Otherwise, it all works.
I agree with wespj I think you should be more specific when you are explaining the basics of this diet.