What do you think of my webpage?

Discussion in 'Websites' started by videos, Sep 5, 2008.

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    Hi everyone, just looking for advice on my weight loss webpage on squidoo... it's for the scarsdale diet to go along with my diet website. It's my first squidoo lens so just wondering what people thought. Thanks-
     
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  2. Alevoor

    Alevoor Active Member

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  3. mattay87

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    Nice, Only thing I would say is to make text larger in the bottom right of page :D
     
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    as one who doesn't know that the Scarsdale Diet is, I think you need a big obvious link somewhere to a page that explains the basics. Otherwise, it all works.
     
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    I agree with wespj I think you should be more specific when you are explaining the basics of this diet.
     
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  6. dota

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    yes i also agree with u
    and For tips
    make ur seo become Good
    more over with ur meta
     
    dota, Sep 6, 2008 IP