what do you think of my hat design?

Hey!

I'm designing a hat for myself and want some ideas. These first designs are VERY basic and I am very open to design ideas and suggestions for the logo, placement of the logo, or anything else to do with hats

Here are the 2 first designs:
Design 1 || Design 2

Thanks!!!

 

1'st one looks better for me.... simply but look's good.

 

Thanks for the opinion. I feel like the logo needs a change or something about it isn't right... anyone have any idea?

 

Looks like balls.

 

Instead of being rude, if you could be a little constructive that would be nice.

No need to be like that.

 

Sorry, I did not mean to offend but it kinda does. You yourself said that something about it doesn't look right.

Ok, here's something maybe a bit more constructive.
Improve its readability, because I cannot tell whether its 'bdp' or 'bqb' and eventually space your letters.

 

Well you obviously don't understand the logo then. The letters are all connected because they can be reversed to be the same letter with some twisting and turning. Thanks for your opinion though, I do appreciate it.

 

I suggest making the gap between the first two letters wider to balance the space just like the gap between the last two letters. I don't know if you get what I'm saying, just a suggestion.

 

I do get what you're saying, thanks for that. I'm going to do it actually.

 

These are very cool. If you get good at the whole fashion design thing, you should think about taking up designing clothes as a hobby and then maybe down the line it would progress into a career option for you.

 

haha glad you like them!!!

I don't think i'm going to start designing clothes, but I think it is cool to make some of my own stuff for just me

 

really nice work clean and simple

 

About changing something
http://www.logonerds.com/img/images/woman.jpg
don't like the way she looks like =)
Browse the web and you will find lot of other more attractive girls (of course if you want her to make all eyes on her, but not logos )

 

I think the first one is the better of the two, what are your plans with the design?

 

Just making a hat for myself, but I want it to look professional (and stylish XD).

 

it's cool but ... i think it should be more bold .....

 

did you make any changes?please update

 

What's it say?

 

it says bdp (my initials)

I haven't made any changes yet, will get to it soon.

 

Hey not bad but you should add some sort of line with it.