What do you think about this landing page

Discussion in 'General Marketing' started by formula, Apr 24, 2009.

  1. #1
    Hi all,

    I have just put online my first landing page that tries to target freelancers.
    Please let me know what do you think about it

    many thanks!
     
    formula, Apr 24, 2009 IP
  2. shazin

    shazin Guest

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    #2
    Really like it.
    I'd reduce a bit the size of that Try now button but it's just a matter of personal preferences i suppose..
     
    shazin, Apr 24, 2009 IP
  3. TaylorH

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    #3
    Looks good. I'd work on getting their email or info if possible. Is it possible to offer a demo or free trial? If so, offer them access for a very limited time for submitting their email info. You can build up your base to further market this product to as well
     
    TaylorH, Apr 24, 2009 IP
  4. StudentLife

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    #4
    You landing page looks very clean and well thought out. You may want to clear up any confusion with the username/password on the bottom - if they need to make one up or if that is the demo login, etc.
     
    StudentLife, Apr 24, 2009 IP
  5. formula

    formula Well-Known Member

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    #5
    thanks that is a good idea. I think I am going to change it a bit and instead of the demo form offer 30 days free trial. What do you think?
     
    formula, Apr 30, 2009 IP
  6. bobchrist

    bobchrist Active Member

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    #6
    I think the Demo feature is important however you can make it 15 days free trial instead of 30 days.
     
    bobchrist, Apr 30, 2009 IP
  7. formula

    formula Well-Known Member

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    #7
    why 15 instead of 30?
     
    formula, Apr 30, 2009 IP
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    #8
    You have some data appearing in the name and email fields

    <?=$nname?> and <?=$email?>
     
    newsniche, Apr 30, 2009 IP
  9. formula

    formula Well-Known Member

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    #9
    thanks - some time wordpress do wired things...
     
    formula, Apr 30, 2009 IP
  10. Fox30

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    #10
    I like it...but. I would move the capture form up and to the side...so that your visitors don't have to scroll down. Minimize actions. ;)
     
    Fox30, Apr 30, 2009 IP
  11. formula

    formula Well-Known Member

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    #11
    thanks
    what do you think about the price?
     
    formula, May 6, 2009 IP
  12. Kinkyjoe

    Kinkyjoe Well-Known Member

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    #12
    It's good, colors are warm and easy on the eyes, text is good... You got a fine layout :)
     
    Kinkyjoe, May 6, 2009 IP
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    #13
    awesome dude....
     
    asadkhan1084, May 6, 2009 IP
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    #14
    Looks perfect, doesn't look like other crap landing pages, which looks crappy.
    I think you must try to bring the input boxes a bit above (not necessary though)
    If possible, keep some screenshot's and most important, keep some User Reviews :D

    Good Luck
     
    anildewani, May 6, 2009 IP
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    #15
    Its good interface and colors , but i think the TRY NOW button is much bigger make it reduce the size,
    Make the text visible in one go for user because many users hates scrolling fof the first page,
    Remove the error from 2 fields Name and Email its scares the user.

    I will pray for your success of this project., Good Job Done.
     
    mujahid176, May 6, 2009 IP
  16. Salman T

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    #16
    Nice but i'll suggest you to put email box below try now button .... good luck
     
    Salman T, May 6, 2009 IP