If you're expecting to get sales from a U.S./U.K./AUS/NZ/CAN audience which I assume you are, you're not going to get anywhere with that copy. You're definitely going to want to hire a copywriter, alot of the grammar is incorrect and half of it doesn't even make sense for example, "Are you "interesting" calls on your spouse or child's phone?". As for the layout it isn't actually that bad, the logo image could be a little better but overall not that bad.
I couldn't get past the first paragraph of copy. You have to fix your copy first or you are dead in the water. I went back a second time to look at your design. I like the look of the design but I would have a call to action button somewhere before the fold. The first opportunity for me to click on your link I would never get there because I wouldn't read that far with your current copy. Get you copy fixed and you will be in a much better position to profit. I would reword the following sentence too "If you answered YES, be glad that you have Lek.com.np on your side" Good luck.
It looks good but yeah a lot of grammatical errors and it looks really blank. Maybe put a little more graphics work into it also to make it look a like a professional review site. This way people will take your reviews much more seriously
You've got some good tips/advice and graphics but you need to change the layout. It just looks a little disorganized and looks unprofessional. I would work on the header area and the opening has to many questions all tied up in one paragraph.
its ok looking, not the best but not the worst either. I would not expect dramatic results with it, but if its your first try then its not too bad. I agree the domain migh tbe an issue too.