What do u think about my poetry

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by extra_work, May 4, 2008.

  1. #1
    So many times I spent,
    Alone in the dark thinkin' of you.
    So many tears I shed...why?
    I don't know, but LOVE is the answer...
    I'll always be somewhere there and I will be seeking for you.
    But when will the happiness begin,maybe when I take your hand?
    I don't know, but LOVE is the answer...
    I'm still dreamin' of you
    My love is so strong but I wonder when will my pain reach its end?
    I don't know, but LOVE is the answer...
    Searching the key to your heart I am crying for you.
    I am prayin' to God to take my fear 'cause there's no time left.
    I feel alone without you,do you feel it too?
    I don't know what you need, maybe LOVE is the answer...
    We can be better,am I ready or not yet, or maybe it is late?
    Will be there something between us two?
    I don't know, but I hope LOVE is the answer...
     
    extra_work, May 4, 2008 IP
  2. Cryxellis23

    Cryxellis23 Banned

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    #2
    I like it :) Honestly I envied those people who knew how to write poetry..
    In that way they can express what they feel..
     
    Cryxellis23, May 5, 2008 IP
  3. fairy00

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    #3
    That's quite good!
     
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  4. EvcRo

    EvcRo Notable Member

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    #4
    Wow...it's really nice your poem :) Share with us more...if you have more lovely poems ;)
     
    EvcRo, May 5, 2008 IP
  5. WebmasterB

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    #5
    It's a nice poem. Wish I could write poetry like that. Then the chicks would think I'm smart and be all over me.
     
    WebmasterB, May 5, 2008 IP
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    #6
    realy nice poem thanks for sharing :)
     
    puionNeo, May 5, 2008 IP
  7. Article Writing

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    #7
    nice poem !!
     
    Article Writing, May 5, 2008 IP