what about this landing page?

hi all

Need your reviews in this 1st atempt of a specific landing page.

We sell webdesign etc etc and want to convert with this one. The last idea was not so good, and didn't convert... so, review it please!

http://www.santaideia.com/promocao2007.html

 

Olá.

Vi que são portugueses, aproveito para falar português.

Acho que a vossa Landing Page não está muito atractiva, está demasiado longa e o uso das cores não é o melhor... O call to action está demasiado escondido e não se lêem vantagens em pedir-vos uma proposta, além do mau design da vossa landing page.

Mas o facto de terem landing pages, já é um bom principio.

Eu começava pelo principio: preto em branco e destaque em cor para o call to action e vantagens, antes do formulário. Mais texto e mais coerente.

Eu trabalho numa empresa de Web Marketing, por isso se quiserem estamos à disposição

Nuno
www.searchmarketing.pt

 

well, the first review is negative no problem, keep them coming.

 

Well, I don't understand the language in it, but for the design:

I would use a lighter background that won't stand our more than the text since you want the visiters to concentrate on the text content right?

 

Yep, you should really do something with the background, maybe make it a little brighter like
and it will look very good.

 

well, made some changes from top to bottom.

keep those reviews comming

 

I can't read the language but I quite like the page itself.
Very clean looking without too much too distract the eye so the viewer will be drawn to the text.

I've definitely seen worse!

 

well, thanks guys.

one day, 400 uniques, and not a single one converted. ouch!
guess i'll have to do better than this...

 

I like the site, but I know most people don't scroll, so try to keep it smaller and fit as much of it as you can without having to force people to scroll...
I can't say anything about the text, I don't know the language =/