weight-loss-hypnosis.myshopify.com need review

Hello,

This is just my first e-commerce site. I'm so newbie to this so im using shopify service.

The url is http://weight-loss-hypnosis.myshopify.com

I'm very glad if you could give me suggestion of what to do next.


Thanks,
Asep

 

Honestly the website needs a lot of work. When i design a new website i brows the web and find several websites that i like and are providing similar items or are selling the same product. Then put a design together by combining what i like from all the site i came across. Some websites are better then others and i would spen at least one to two weeks in finding the correct ones.

Good luck

 

I would start from changing the font of "Weight Loss Hypnosis"

to something that would look more like a logotype and not like just the rest of the plain text,

after all it is (if I'm not mistaking) your logo right?

Hope that helps.

 

Nice Layout. you will Try to add Nice Logo header

 

i have seen this site nice lay out and logo but i think font sizes and colors are not matching. so think about it

 

It is a nice template, good luck.

 

You have got amazing layout and design, i like font color of your site

 

I think some testimonials would help sell. It needs more graphics and content it general.

 

Testimonials, reviews, new designs, a new header -- the layout, I love. Work on the site and the site will pay off, let me know if you need help creating a site you power rather than shopify (don't worry, it's free - oscommerce)

 

@tigrrra Hi, thanks for review. As i said it's just created site, yeah i would like to find some good one for comparison. But i prefer straight to the point site and simple design yet faster loading time. I think i would add some graphics though.

@mediapro yup, weight loss hypnosis would be site's logo. Would you mind let me know where should i hire someone to do this?

@xoticdezzine I would hire someone to do the logo soon.

@shanmit45 I would think about it. Thanks. What font color do you think the best for white background?

@hotalexa Thanks.

@patncksia2007 Thanks.

@deyounggerry Yup thanks for remind me. Testimonials would be added soon. I would ask previous costumers to do so, i hope they would.

@Deus Ex Haha, i love the word FREE. I would love to know that mate.

 

More Content, More Content is the key

 

very nice design!

did you design it on your own?

 

simple, nice, but I personally would want to see more stuff in it...add more stuff, you definitely need a nav bar, to say the least

 

@qiren83 Actually, the design came from shopify package. I didn't design it, but i could modify some code though.

 

Content, need more content please!

 

i think you should change your themes or you need to modify it become better, cause it looks pale
loL
and put more article to attract buyers dats the point

 

@bobojalil yea sure, more articles would be added soon. Thanks.

 

your site design is too simple.

 

@mony911 To be honest, i like a simple and straight to the point websites.