Weight Loss Copy Critique?

Discussion in 'Copywriting' started by popedope, Jun 20, 2008.

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    hi guys,

    Not seen anything against ask for a critique here but if it's bad then please remove the post.



    What are your thoughts on this copy? How can I improve it?

    Thanks in advance

    rich
     
    popedope, Jun 20, 2008 IP
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    First of all, make your tinyurl link work :)
     
    AffiliateSupportTeam, Jun 20, 2008 IP
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