Hello guys, Could you please review my blog, so that i will improve it. I am totally new to blogging and lack a lot of nuances in the area! Here's my site: www.facileweightloss.com Thank you!!
Well straightaway, I think the use of the word "facile" was a bad choice. It carries the connotation of "too easy" or "overly simplistic." It's not a positive word, and it's not something I'd associate with a real weight-loss website. Also, I'd suggest you get someone to edit your content, since it's kind of long and rambling right now and is not easily understood. Online, you need to be attention-grabbing, punchy, and concise. If you need this kind of service please feel free to PM me for my rates.
Hi as megan pointed out the text is a little too much and could be spaced a little better to be more pleasing on the eye. That said I love the header graphic and the colour scheme. the domain name is again another fair point I don't think i would ever look for that keyword while looking for weight loss sites. However you have a solid design but it needs a little tweak here and there.
Yeah, the smiley-faces work for me. After all, I want to have positive images associated with weight loss.
Thanks guys for your true reviews. The thing is, i am unable to restrict the content and it looks too much a content to read. Also as i am new to this blogging, could you help me with getting better PRs and some good reputation to my blog. Thanks in advance!