Website online store , very good for review

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  2. Project Mobius

    Project Mobius Peon

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    hi there, you might wanna

    - get rid of that roll of money at the Save Money section, kinda gives it a cheap feeling like one of those easy money making scam sites

    - put the IklanOke.com image link as well as the product scroller at the left just below the shout box, also consider getting rid of the product scroller once and for all since you already have a simple product navigation and search option

    +1 for the gradient filled round corner container and rotating image banner on the top though :)

    PM
     
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    I agree with the above, grammatical errors I noticed:

    - The red tab that says "Our Product" should say "Our Products" since there's more than one product displayed.

    - On the top navigation menu, it says Hot Product, should be Hot Products

    - On the Logo, instead of Gadget Online Store, it would sound better if it was called Online Gadget Store

    There's my 2 cents
     
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  4. ohmer

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    Domain name is bad, says nothing about a store and is hard to remember. Also, the bottom row of phones are off the table on ie7.
     
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  5. proxy-listing.com

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    #5
    its fix about words "s"
     
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  6. magicworld11

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    well ur domain name is very long, ppl can remember it easily. make it small like some (eggi.com)
     
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  7. de2008

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    lol all the images dont work. 0/100, sorry.. this should probably be fixed
     
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    Friend,
    There is No Payment Gateway , not even Good Domain Name too Long as per reviews by others..
    and i suggest you friend you can try some small 2 letters domains and must add some softwares or scripts in which phones can be compared with each another. You can check other mobiles stores on Google or Search Engines. I hope you will be work on it more

    Regards
    Rajat Chugh
     
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    I think that your "Google" header banner at the top totally overpowers your homepage, when I first arrive, I am thinking about "Do it yourself graphics - ads by google" and NOT Rajawali Communications. The 3 items at the foot of the page appear over the top of your "Hot Product" banner and even though there is very little text on the page, there are several spelling/grammatical errors. The page source code reveals that there is very little on the page for the search engines to index, so perhaps you need a little more text to be seo friendly (perhaps a good description of each of your front page products? I agree with one of the other posters that a roll of cash doesn't really project a professional image.
     
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    wagster: yes i think this need seo
     
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    your logo does not line up in FF.
     
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  12. punjabi4lyfe

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    Nice Web:p
     
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