Website For Review

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    umairraja52, Oct 31, 2009 IP
  2. [/root.]

    [/root.] Well-Known Member

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    Site is not available :(
     
    [/root.], Oct 31, 2009 IP
  3. DartLady

    DartLady Active Member

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    1. There is an ad right at eye level and above your text, taking people away from your site immediately. Suggest moving that ad to below your text, or at least put some text above it so people will know what your site is about.
    2. You might want to move the Google Ads out of the left directory column as they interfere with negotiating the site.
    3. The ads on the right side are all too large. Basically, this site, as it stands now, is simply ads, all of which invite the reader to leave your site and go somewhere else. Once they do, you've lost them because they won't come back.
    4. The guy crying is irritating - it's probably part of that debt relief ad middle/top of the page.
    5. The header is not really that clear. Perhaps add a graphic of someone sitting at a desk, hair messed up, papers on the desk, with a calculator. Debts piled high. It doesn't matter what country; everyone understands debt/stress.
    6. Too many words in your content text are links to ads - once again taking someone away. perhaps that is your goal?
    7. Basically there are way too many ads on the page and all of them taking over your content. If I came to your site, I would leave it immediately. How can you address the pain of debt? Turn the knife, cut a little deeper, make it emotional. Then offer solutions. I don't see any of that right now.
     
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    avianto Peon

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    nie keyword, i think this is favorite keyword for adsense
     
    avianto, Oct 31, 2009 IP
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    nice but looks like blog i think
     
    hrromrise, Nov 1, 2009 IP