Website for ebook aimed at 18-40 males

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    tswartz, Mar 23, 2010 IP
  2. SimonV

    SimonV Active Member

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    Very nice design

    Sales copy could have a bullet point list of the benefits of the ebook

    Maybe more of a cohesive story at start, exploring the problem and how you "stumbled" on the solution..

    But i aint no expert in sales copy.

    Overall pretty darn good !
     
    SimonV, Mar 23, 2010 IP
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    tswartz Peon

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    Thanks. I've considered the bullet list, as it seems to be pretty successful elsewhere. It's in the hopper.

    (We're also accepting affiliates @ 75% commission...check the ClickBank forum or the affiliates page at the bottom of the site.)
     
    tswartz, Mar 26, 2010 IP
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    I like it it looks good just needs benefits
     
    magmark, Apr 26, 2010 IP