web 2.0 first attempts, c/c please

Discussion in 'Graphics & Multimedia' started by Luci, May 28, 2008.

  1. #1
    please could I have some useful c/c for my first attempts at a web 2.0 layout:

    version 1:
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    version 2:
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    feel free to suggest fonts/colours/brushes and be as harsh as you like =) thanks!
     
    Luci, May 28, 2008 IP
  2. Faint

    Faint Well-Known Member

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    I like the second one better for sure because the emblem behind the text just seems to go better. One suggestion is to slightly darken the colors in the "Boo-yah." so that the text stands out more, increasing the visibility.
     
    Faint, May 28, 2008 IP
  3. twizzlers

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    I like the 2nd one better. The first one looks like its saying "Doo-yah"
     
    twizzlers, May 28, 2008 IP
  4. ObsessiO

    ObsessiO Active Member

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    Yes, the second one is better, because of ur font choose is correctly.

    If u want to apply web 2.0 to ur works, u have to choose right fonts.
     
    ObsessiO, May 28, 2008 IP
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    2ND one.

    I would also change the font in "link" and make it something more trippy to match the main logo.

    one looks too techy then the other.

    Good contrast and nice work
     
    LittleJonSupportSite, May 28, 2008 IP
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    Ascendancy Active Member

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    Definitely the second one. The logo font is bigger / easier to read, plus it blends nicer.
     
    Ascendancy, May 28, 2008 IP
  7. Luci

    Luci Peon

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    thanks for the tips! what do you mean by trippy?
     
    Luci, May 29, 2008 IP
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    The second one is nice!
     
    MZA, May 30, 2008 IP
  9. Rohit007145

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    Probably something bolder and flatter in for the links would be nicer.
     
    Rohit007145, May 30, 2008 IP