Want review for a nice Webhosting template

Discussion in 'Graphics & Multimedia' started by SofTiN, Sep 3, 2008.

  1. #1
    Hi
    I want your review about a design I have made
    I want also know how much can I get if I sell this design

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    SofTiN, Sep 3, 2008 IP
  2. Digital_Designer

    Digital_Designer Banned

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    #2
    Good Design :) I think add more colors and make texts more professional.

    Hope it helps :)
     
    Digital_Designer, Sep 3, 2008 IP
  3. Mark.S

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    #3
    HMM but put some more colors which can attract hmm BTW its nice all the best
    Peace
     
    Mark.S, Sep 3, 2008 IP
  4. SofTiN

    SofTiN Banned

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    #4
    Thanks for you replies
    But colors like what
     
    SofTiN, Sep 3, 2008 IP
  5. MarbleHost.com

    MarbleHost.com Well-Known Member Affiliate Manager

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    #5
    A little futuristic for me. And the best template doesn't look like template :) ...but this looks.
     
    MarbleHost.com, Sep 3, 2008 IP
  6. psytech

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    #6
    Only the boxes with Plan1, Plan2, Plan3 makes this a webhosting site.
    I don't like the design at all. Less and bad chosen colors, fonts, main menu bottons style...
     
    psytech, Sep 3, 2008 IP
  7. poison_paradize

    poison_paradize Well-Known Member

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    #7
    The menu does not look that appealing. You could improve it greatly
     
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    camp185 Well-Known Member

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    #8
    Doesn't the $ symbol go on the left?
     
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  9. SofTiN

    SofTiN Banned

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    #9
    New updated version
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    SofTiN, Sep 4, 2008 IP
  10. klikage

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    #10
    I can buy it for 40$ without coding, if yes! please pm me.
     
    klikage, Sep 4, 2008 IP
  11. SofTiN

    SofTiN Banned

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    #11
    No I'm looking for better price
    Any other review
     
    SofTiN, Sep 5, 2008 IP
  12. SofTiN

    SofTiN Banned

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    #12
    Another try
    Navigation button updated
    [​IMG]
     
    SofTiN, Sep 5, 2008 IP
  13. yuvasweb

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    #13
    looks really good but old fashioned. Your next template must be better. use light colors.
     
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  14. yuvasweb

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    #14
    Good start for beginner but, bad if u are experienced. In my company, beginners do better design than this.
     
    yuvasweb, Sep 5, 2008 IP
  15. blwire

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    #15
    rarely see people using times new roman these days :) maybe change up the fonts and add some dividers. Also ide put the prices on top, seems a higher priority than the description.
     
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  16. inzpiration

    inzpiration Active Member

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    #16
    If you think that's nice that's ok man, but I think that the fonts used are not working. really. the machine image you're using on the left corner is not that great either, gneral blue color scheme seems a little bit boring, there that's my honest review.

    Best regards.
     
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  17. SofTiN

    SofTiN Banned

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    #17
    Thanks for all your reviews
     
    SofTiN, Sep 5, 2008 IP
  18. remoradea

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    #18
    Hello my friend.

    You did a pretty good job, but there are a few things:

    1. The first thing you have to do is to watch the contrast in your navigation buttons. In the last image you have white text on gray background. Try something with more contrast. And again, in the active button you have a blue texture on a blue background.

    2. Now we get to the alignment and grouping. What is the most important thing on this page, the package or the welcome text? If the hosting packages, than exchange position vith the welcome text, and change the size of the welcome text, if it hass less importance.
    The lower menu is not aligned with anything, it's like floating there. Maybe try to mirror the main menu, or start it from the same vertical line as the main menu starts, or from where the home button ends. Try to do line it up with something (usually this should be done when you figure out the layout so you can group the related information and align it, now it will be harder).

    3. White space is good, but only if you know exactly why you placed it there, in the middle of the page. Why is the welcome box smaller and centred? Why is the text between the welcome screen lines so big? just to fill it?

    4. The last thing I want to help you with is the fonts. The text on the middle of the screen it's almost at the same size. You don't emphasize anything this way. And again, the font from the left box is not good. You want to squeeze many information there and the spaces between the letters are to big, the letters are to wide. For the block of thext in the middle I would use one of the sans-serif types.

    ...now use these advices to get better, not to discourage yourself.
     
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  19. crumblepie

    crumblepie Well-Known Member

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    #19
    I love the layout, but spend more time on the logo, fonts and image used. The general idea is there and it looks great, but only with more time put in will it look more professional.
     
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    #20
    layout is quite generic, there are some pixelated areas but the colors are what bother me the most. The blue doesn't work (which is unusual given that blue is one of the most used colors on the web). Think about the color scheme a little more. Use some gradients perhaps and some gentle shades of blue.

    Also the font on the buttons is not right. Neither is the color constrast of the light gray against white text.

    Not being mean, but i wouldn't pay for the design as it stands.

    Work on it a bit more, you have a good idea there, now you have to refine it and take the advice given by some on this site and tweak the design till it becomes great!
     
    ThirdDash, Sep 6, 2008 IP