Visit my JV site

Hi ppl. This is a site of JV with my frnd and its brand new.Tell me how did you like it.

http://evevoltech.com

 

Ok, here are some points:
1. You need a vision - how are you going to make money? What do you want this site to do for you? What's the idea?
2. Get a nice logo/top background
3. The Log In section is too prominent. Do you want your visitors to log in or click on offers?????
4. Get a plugin for the tag cloud - it is breaking out of the borders.

 

Your site leaves me confused an annoyed. Read the points above, good ideas.

 

Content is too little.

 

How can anyone be incouraged to read an article when the excerpt reads only "What [...]" ?
All titles have popups "permanent link to <title again>". Redundant and annoying.
Anyway, continue working on it, has potential.

 

Better titles. Opening paragraph as a teaser would be good.
What is the purpose of the site? Paypal reviews and info or product reviews?

 

Add header picture to your site, it will be nice dude

 

Thanks, will keep in mind

 

Yes, i know

 

Thanks mate

 

content was small

 

Like i said the site is new folks and i need to do some cosmetic changes

 

Need more replies guys

 

thanks very much

 

the site has potential

 

Thanks Nbc

 

Need more comments guys

 

same, tankard has some really good pointers.

it doesnt seem to have a direct goal. i see ads everywhere and not a real targeted goal on what its about.

 

Wide it up a little. Put the social items first and then twitter feed. Create a logo and complete the follow me section --> put the socials there like Facebook, Twitter, RSS etc

 

domain is little bad , but it is ok , and about content , it is too little , add add more at index page. Theme is white , looks OK