view/rate my squidoo lense

Hey, i just made my first squidoo lens, can i get some rate and reviews on what you guys think, still new to it and could use some useful tips or ideas.

http://www.squidoo.com/how-to-search-engine-optimize-your-site-

 

pretty good lense. now, just go and build lots of backlinks to it.

 

Its what I'm working on now, a few articles that backlink to it as well. using ezarticles and article base, seems like i get the most results from those two sites.