I'm sorry but I beg to differ. No one is trying to `help me`. This is a paid job I am offering and I am giving clear feedback. I have 5+ years experience with Photoshop and if I needed an average, or a so-so design I could do one very very easily. I am offering money to the best effort (more money than most competitions on DP). Several of the designs offerred have honestly been laughably poor, I've been disappointed in them. Others show real promise and I am enjoying working with them. But I am not here to help amateurs learn on the job, they need to go hit up some tutorial sites and get their skills up to par. And that is constructive criticism..! All quality entries are very very welcome
Ok, here's what I am loving about this - Everyone take note - Actual original design work. That phone image is a one off, and this designer is standing out like the pro they are with this. Fantastic sexy interesting font. The "T" dipping under the "Y" is very nice. Use of the star, I have stated several times I like the use of stars. To convey the sex factor why not use ideas like a "red carpet", "spotlights", "sparkles", or have the image stepping out of a limo, or have flashbulbs going off all around it, maybe have motion blur, or sunburst radials etc etc Ok, that said, now some feedback for Tightwad - I can't use an image that looks this feminine. Nor could I use one that looked too masculine. Could you switch out the purple scheme with red or orange, maybe yellow or a combination of those. Good warm neutral colours would look great. I *think* I would like some difference between the two parts of the name, can you make "cell" different in some way? I like the original image, dont get too hung up on making it into the letter "C" though, that really serves no purpose. Could you have the phone doing something? I will definitely be using a pure white background, can you take out the gradiented background, thanks!
@ ZYNDTEL - The second part of the logo is first class, especially the lower version. I think the first part would need a total rethink, the font is too solid/plain and there's no `life` in it. The 2nd part really is very good though.
I am very impressed with this one. Simple, clean, effective and funky. I actually can't think of anything to report back that would need changed. Even "spicing up your mobile" sounds like a great tagline lol. Yup, I'm speechless, this is a very solid entry
I agree with snugbrimm. I think for the quality you want, you're at the wrong site. Try 99designs.com. If I did logos, I wouldn't be entering the contest because of unnecessary negative feedback. You can get your point across without putting designers down; they are spending their time to put something together for you. I'm not sure how long you've been on DP, but the majority of designers here are still learning.
Hey Renderwork, this is a great start. You've created a brand and an identity here with ease. It's too feminine with all the purple, can you redo it more neutral eg not blue either. I like the sliced phone but not the semi circle around it - can you keep the sliced phone idea and see how you could work that it. Drop the .com bit too. Great effort
Hey Gamelord, what i actually really like here is the phone on its own with the url shown on the screen. I'm surprised no one has tried this yet. I like the little C in the power button. My feedback would be that maybe a phone lying horizontally might be good, rather than vertical and I would like to see something behind the url on the phones wallpaper, maybe stars/gradient/somethinginteresting Replace the grey in the name, I'm seeing a lot of greys from various designs here and I always shoot them down! I like this concept a lot, quite simple but works well!
Sorry i dont like it at all. I dont mean to be harsh in any of my feedbacks, just trying to be clear.
I like the energy and vibrancy of the logo here. But the yellow and the purple clashes badly i think. The phone as you have it doesnt make a good letter "i". The letters look drunk and not in a good way This is a good start though, would definitely be interested in any further revisions you do ?
This is really good. Feedback - can you reduce the amount of blue or warm it up a bit, and can you maybe adjust the gradient so instead of a straight line it is a wave? This is a really good starting point, mix up the colors a bit and lets see what the next level is
heres my second revision. was thinking cell ish logo not (ball) when i made my first entry. XD well here a more obvious one. hope youll like it\
Wow this is pretty darn good My only minor feedback would be that it's really not clear that the block of red is a red carpet. The shooting star is cool, but maybe needs tweaked a little to look more like the letter "i". And The letter colours are great, they might benefit from a drop shadow or reflection or a stroke outline to make them "pop out" of the white background more?
This is really solid work. The unique phone is funky and doesnt look like anything on the market which is great. Drop the ".com" part. The sunburst makes me think of a lime Can you get more colours into the whole thing? Good job!