@ cil13 For both logos, please extend the V to touch/affect all three bars. widen it onto the other bars as well. For lower logo, center the text. I wander what the two letters would look like if the cut off parts of the bars were still there ie, not excluded, so if possible make a mock up of MB only with white v touching all bars, but not cutting off the remainders of the bars. Bars still full there, just white line running through them. Thank you
@BS_webdeciphers nah, i don't like the figure, it symbolises justice or something. I want it to symbolise advancement, knowledge, people etc. Try not to go too close to greek culture. Top of the icon should not be above the top of text, similarly for the bottom. F and M should be aligned. Thank you
@BS_webdeciphers hmm. no. Too many people? different people icon, knowledge (book) icon something like that The height of the two lines of text should be the same as the height of the circular icon. Thank you
@cil13 The width of the text should be the same as of the two letters, if text appearing below the two letters. Same with height if text appearing to the right of the two letters. The V should start from the middle of the letters. Can you make V not curvy but straight? Can you make the bars be identifiable in the cutout part as well? so just extend the two lines in the middle of the letter all the way. Currently there is a V shaped cutout, just run the two lines through the v Cutout. Going good! Thank you.
@ Chewysmum Can you make one more modification, and include it in your offer of logos so far. Can you please, make the three faces appear in an ascending size from small face to large face. so that the leftmost face is a bit smaller than the rest, then the second face is a little larger, and the third face is the largest. Then, rotate all three faces instead of looking straight to the right, to look up right at 45 degrees angle (or other angle that doesn't look too crap, from your point of view) add it to the other two logos in your submittal. Thank you
@BS_webdeciphers That is your response to my feedback? new feedback: loose the stick figurines altogether. try using a book in the middle or something Thank you
@Chewysmum Is it possible you make a reversed colours version? where navy, put white, where white put navy
@ Mr.LeGeNd In first too logos, you are using wella logo icon. Colours are all wrong, see my first post. Icons not suitable. Please try again Thank you
revised version, batch 3 I replaced the "MB" with symbols, as requested. The atom path symbolizes knowledge and the key is for advancement, future etc. (universal symbol). and feedback appreciated
@ LianeYoungBlogger Atom logo reminds me of a nuclear plant. so no. Key doesn't do anything for me. The rest is good. Try some other symbols like faces, profiles, books. Thank you.
@Chewysmom First one, no good. Can you make the third one same as the second one, no navy background. Thank you.